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Data log subject: clevax, status: deceased, life role: ultramarines tactical squad battle brother, re: dreadnought, age on death: approx 247 years,
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The dreadnought clevax raised his assault cannon and opened fire tearing another chaos marine into pieces, "that's the 25th piece of filth I've killed today!" the dreadnought shouted over his vox transmitter to his battle brother's. Suddenly they herd a roaring battle cry "BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!" screamed a group of korn berserker's sprinting down a ridge dust flying up behind them. They then drew their chain axes making them buzz whilst whipping themselves up into frenzy.
" Shit!" said the sergeant then he roared "DRAW YOUR KNIVES MARINES!" there was a defining sound of armoured feet hitting the ground as the korn berserkers met with the marine tactical squad. The berserker's threw the first few marines into the air whilst swinging their axes wildly slashing a space marine across the face slicing his head in half the berserker's went wild as they were showered in the unfortunate marine's blood the other marines looked on in disgust and counter-charged the berserker's cutting two of their number down.
The sound of the dreadnought charging turned a few head's as he lunged for the nearest berserker and crushed him in his inescapable grip. Faced with this new threat the berserker's turned their attention to him and regrouped for another charge but the dreadnought didn't give them the chance to regroup. He tore a few pieces with his assault cannon and mortally wounded another the remaining were reduced to two by his heavy flamer. The remaining two began to charge at him melta bombs in their hands, still due to their earlier failure korn had passed his judgement and found them unworthy of his blessing and he punished them. The berserkers stopped in their tracks leaving the confused marines looking on as the berserkers clasped their hand's to their head's and started to scream. Blood pored from their ears and mouth, their eyes melted in their sockets and finally their head's exploded showering the dreadnought and his battle brother's in gore.
"All right marines good work today the imperial guard should be able to handle the remaining cultists," said the sergeant of the battered tactical squad. A member of the tactical squad turned to the dreadnought and said "by the emperor, ancient clevax you sure showed those heretics who's in charge round here their blasted god won't forget this defeat in a hurry" the dreadnought replied "thank you but you saw what happened to the heretics, their face's literally melted and their heads exploded something tells me if their god is willing to sacrifice his best warriors as he just did this defeat hasn't at all bothered him at all!" "Well it doesn't matter now, anyway were heading back to base" said the marine. Back at the base the captain of the forth company witch clevax was a member of was giving a roaring speech about how the marines fought with bravery and distinction and how they should be proud to be the emperors finest. meanwhile the dreadnought was in the maintenance bays….
I have rewritten this as a response to the complaints about punctual errors and bad spacing. I am pleased everyone out there brought this to my attention; I will continue to rewrite previous chapters so they make more sense. I seem to have forgotten the disclaimer, I micojam do not own the rights to warhammer 40,000 or it's related articles.
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