This is my little Kenshin and Kaoru poem i wrote in my spare time. tell me what you think.

Never Fade:

You're everything I want to be
You're everything that can't conceive
I tried so hard to understand
What I can't began to recall

I started to turn around
But then became bound
By a senseless past
That wont leave to fast

Its grasp is strangling
Everything is fading
and when I think I can
Finally put it to rest
It's just like a pest
It keeps coming,
Never going,
Never leaving it just lingers
At the tips of my fingers

You then stood up
With your anxiousness
Telling me off with straightness
I can be what I want
I can lose what I want
I can put it to rest
I can believe what I want
That is what you gave me
and it will never fade.