Into The Dark

by HeartHorses12

What if instead of visiting Caleb Tris ran away? What if she returned a week later and thought Four already replaced her with another initiative? This is my first story and my friends are always encouraging me to write more, so here's the product.

1. Chapter 1-What's the difference

Chapter One-What's the difference

Hello! Please give me ideas because I have no idea what I'm doing and PLEASE review.

There was only the soft snapping of sticks as I made my way through Amity's orchids. I couldn't stay here, in this city. I just didn't belong here, I didn't belong anywhere. I wasn't kind, smart, honest, selfless or brave. I was a coward for leaving for giving up and now that I've left no one will invite me back in not even Four.

I spent the night sitting in an apple tree in the way back of the orchid eating apples. I missed the dauntless food/cake. I missed knowing that Four wasn't too far away and always ready to protect me but I didn't miss Peter. I didn't miss getting beaten up in fights everyday or getting knifes thrown at my head. I spent the rest of the night and some of the morning debating weather or not leaving was the right thing to do. I missed Chris but not Molly. I wanted to be near Four but not Eric. Was leaving really any better than staying?

I wonder if Al regretted jumping. Dauntless thought he was brave, I thought he was coward. What's the difference, dauntless are cowards.

I was getting tired of fruit by the end of that week. My clothes were dirty and my body ached from sleeping in trees or against them. My head felt like hell and I craved dauntless cake. It was time to go back.

No matter how hard I tried to convince myself not too, my body wouldn't listen it just walked back on its own.

I know it's really short and bad, but PLEASE review and continue to read. I promise it will get better. I'm ok with review pointing out my mistakes but please don't insult my work.