Hi! I`m wontongirl, and here`s the basic summary to my story…
'What happens when the flock believes Max is dead? And what happens when they are split apart after they find they`re real parents? BIG surprise for Fang when he finds his family, and how does he handle 'Max`s death'? National problems and secrecy is key to solving a big puzzle-piece when saving the world.'
Basically sums that up, hope u like my story! 1st fan-fic, I need reviews!
Disclaimer: *sigh* no matter how much i wish MR was my creation, it isn`t.
REBEL
Chapter 1
Nobody`s POV
Fang swept the room with his metallic dark blue eyes. It seemed clear of all the S.S Guards and he moved forward. Lightly stepping on the creaking hardwood as to not make a sound, he was swift and moved quickly knowing that he would never get another chance to look for it. (Security was tight….etc)
Max POV
6 months earlier…
I jolted awake from a terrible night`s sleep completely tangled up in my bed. For one thing, I was pretty sure I had went to sleep with my head at the other end of the bed, and I couldn`t get my legs out of the blankets that were stuck in a heap near the headboard. I looked around the room to see Angel smiling at me with frazzled blond curls and her big blue eyes.
I just looked at her tiredly for a moment before gazing across the room for Nudge.
"She went down to the pool with Gazzy." Angel said quite frankly, but I instantly swiveled my head around to look at her.
"Alone???" I asked angrily, as she kept smiling and played with Celeste curiously unconcerned.
"Well Iggy`s eating breakfast on the patio, he can hear them."
I sighed and somehow managed to pull my legs out from under the blankets.
"Our packs are in the boys rooms." She said knowing I wanted to get a shower after my restless night.
"Thanks Ange," I said, trying to work on the whole niceness factor. Angel didn`t do anything wrong…
So in my purple tank top and black shorts I waltzed right into the boys room, forgetting that Angel didn`t say anything about where Fang was. Lucky for me, he was on the windowsill staring at his shiny black laptop with a confused expression. But as I came in he looked up and smirked at me. I must`ve been a sight, with frazzled light brown hair sticking out every which way.
"Shut up." I said coldly, as I stooped down for my pack.
He frowned and looked at his computer as he whispered tiredly, "Funny. I don`t remember saying anything…"
I glared at him before I came over to see what he was reading about but as I did, he suddenly shut his laptop lid and set it aside standing up while the wind tore through his hair from outside.
"What?" I said incredulously, he never hid stuff on his blog away from me.
Fang looked at me, and usually emotionally lacking I realized his eyes were staring at me curiously before he shook his head and walked past me mumbling "Going to go get breakfast."
I looked at my pack in my hands, glaring at it, as if torturing it for the answers I wanted. Needed. And as I walked slowly back into the girl`s room I looked up to find Angel in a swimsuit.
"Max, can I go swim with Nudge and Gazzy?" Angel asked innocently and I sighed.
"Go for it cupcake. Just no mind tricks, got it?"
Got it Max! - and she left the room before I even realized she spoke to me through her telepathy and could say anything to her about it.
Needless to say, my shower took a bit over 45 minutes, and was boiling hot. I clambered out of the bathroom with a towel around my body, my shoulder-length hair dripping slowly onto my skin. As soon as I was out I knew somebody was already out there and I prepared myself for a fight, hoping my towel would stay as is.
I stepped out cautiously, pretending to fiddle with my hair so they thought they didn`t see me coming, but as I looked up a realized it was a false alarm.
"The whole silent thing is not the way to go when I'm expecting Erasers at my doorstep at any time, Fang." I said calmly, although extremely irritated that he was in the girls' room when I was taking a shower. He merely looked at me with a silent disregard and I knew I was probably blushing like a tomato.
"So, is there a reason you`re in here?" I asked in hope of him leaving so I could change.
"Ever heard of the term 'Fax'?" He asked casually, but I could tell it was something important so I answered truthfully.
"You mean, like a fax machine?" I asked pointedly, I knew that he knew what a fax was, why was he asking me something so completely random?
"Never mind" he said quietly, and kept looking at me. He stood so still I was sure he would turn invisible at any moment. I couldn`t stand it any longer,
"Can I change?" I raised my eyebrows and glanced from him to the door.
"Yeah" He replied quickly and left without another word.
Now I was so confused and frustrated I wanted another shower. Or maybe a cookie.
So you`re probably wondering how we can hide our wings with swimsuits. The answer is simple; Pick a small, secluded hotel in the middle of nowhere, then buy swim shirts in two sizes too big, then, tuck in wings tightly if people are around.
This plan seems to benefit me the most though. Angel and Nudge can`t force me into a bikini… I love my wings for the stupidest reasons sometimes.
So there u go, the first chapter, sorry it`s kind of short. But since i`m nice, i`ll give u two more, keep reading it gets better - - -
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