-Edit- Okay so I'm busy with the rest of the story, and I've got a question for you guys. I've noticed that the chapters are kinda short, and I've been wondering if I should just make this a oneshot, or make really short chapters every time, and I really don't know what to do, so I'm asking you. Would you rather have a oneshot or a story with more but short chapters?
ALSO I edited this chapter, but I don't know if I did it right, or made it even worse this time...
*I finally found out how to edit my stories on this site^^*
Hey guys! I'm exited, my first fanfic on this site! I hope people enjoy this chapter/opening thingy. Please review so I know people are reading this. If It doesn't get read. I'll be sad :'(
But anyway I'm planning to make this a fanfic with like 7 or 8 chapters or something… I already wrote more chapters, but they're really short, so I have to make 'em longer, and I really want to know if people like this. Also, please give me tips on my writing, because I'm new tot his, I don't speak English so there could be a lot of typo's or just things that look weird. BUT ANYWAY here is the openingchapterthingy of Diary ^^
DISCLAIMER: I do not own naruto, sadly... But I did create an imaginary naruto and Sasuke in my head :D
-Diary-
It has been a few weeks since Sasuke and I started dating, after lots of fighting, chasing, catching, confessions and whatever else happened (too much to explain). All of the villagers accept me now, and sometimes even adress me with 'naruto-sama'! Everythings going great!
Exept for one thing. It turned out that I didn't know everything about Sasuke. It looks like Sasuke has an obsession with something. Not really something I enjoy, Sasuke's inner pervert is a bit too big voor my taste.
Yes that's right. His obsession with sex is freaking me out sometimes, because we're a couple. So guess who's his target. Me. The annoying thing is that If I don't want to do it, he practically assaults me. Meaning that it doesn't matter how much I complain or struggle. There's no escape.
Don't get me wrong. It's not like I want to end our relationship just because of some M-rated hobby. Sasuke's still the guy from before. But less violent… and nicer… and more perverted.
But even though I love Sasuke with whole… okay maybe not my whole heart but you know what I mean, I want to kick some mind into him. I don't want to have sex every day… And thus, because I'm such a genius, I have thought of a couple of plans to stop him from taking it to the next level.
The first thing I'm going to try out is operation difficult clothes. So I'm going to buy those now. If Sasuke can't remove my clothes, he won't be able to get into my pants. Ain't I smart! This will work! Or well… I hope it will work!