Hey guys!I find it worthy to note here, that this is my first story, and therefore might be a bit a bit short for the first few this gets -ki-yay not, oh .ONTO THE STORY!I'm not an actual soldier, so I may get some things wrong!
My name is Sergeant Jacob Lockley, and this is my fucked up story:
I panted, hiding behind cover, FAMAS in hand "Fuck. Fuck. Fuck!"I muttered, blood flowing from a wound on my shoulder, "Andrew! Multiple tango's 12 O'clock!"I yelled into the radio, popping out of cover and launching another few bullets, before popping back down, and heard Andrew's response "Targets locked on, engaging suppressive fire!", and heard bullets being launched, and several gargled screams of pain, with the words "Several tangos down, sir!", as I grinned maniacally, before muttering in "I thought I told you to can the sir shit. You know that pisses me off, Andrew", only to hear the words "Sorry, si-erm, Jake." I quickly popped up out to check for any more enemies, and heard a bullet whiz past my ear, quickly running to a wall, and checking in on Andrew "Andrew, you alright?"I asked, to Andrew's reply of "I'm alright si-Agh!'' as my eyes widened in shock "Andrew? Andrew? Come in! Andrew! Fuck .Fuck. Fuck! First Matt now him two years ago now Andrew!"I said, rage simmering in me, as I popped out of cover, only to receive multiple bullets to my chest, grunting "Argh…Damn…Al…Qaeda…"I said, bleeding out.
Now, sorry about it being so short, but this is just an will be going on to Equestria in the next chapter. If all goes well and this ends up popular, I'll be trying to make longer updates. Review, my dear friends. Also, if it wasn't made clear, Matt was his best friend 2 years ago, who died, and he's a Marine, him and Andrew were the only people left in their squad, since the rest died, so pretty much, I didn't feel like coming up with 2 more , tell me what you thought about criticism is of course, welcomed, so are ideas for the plot since I currently have nada.