I am writing a twilight fan fiction right now, and I want some feedback on whether or not you think it would be a good story.
First of all, here are the characters in the beginning of the story(I'll explain the extra ones):
All the original Cullens
Renesmee
Seth
Jacob
Jordan
Carlie
Belle
Alex
Carlie and Belle are Renesmee and Jacob's twin daughters.
Carlie imprinted on Jordan, a new werewolf and Belle imprinted on Seth. Alex is Belle and Seth's baby son.
First there are some unsolved murders in Forks, which the Cullens know, is a vampire. What they don't know is that it is Caius, who thinks the Cullens should be killed for "creating" Renesmee. Caius soon really wants something and reveals what he is to the people in Forks. The Volturi think that the Cullens are revealing themselves and Alice sees them coming to kill the Cullens. So they make Renesmee, Jacob, Carlie, Jordan, Belle, Seth and Alex leave so they won't be killed.
Those who leave find another wolf pack in another state and live with them for a while. So the whole story is basically about their life with the new wolf pack and other things. It's not finished yet so I don't know exactly what will happen to the Cullens.
Please review this and tell me what you think. If you don't like it then don't be mean please! Just simply say something nice like, I don't think really like it. If you do think it would be good please tell me why, then I might put it on here. I also need a name for it, so if you have any ideas please tell me! Also, if you have any suggestions, I would like them as well, as long as they are nice. Thanks!