Finally I update something, Fatema bugged me to upload this, she wrote the first chapter and I just changed it a little, made it more interesting. but I didn't have a beta so Fatema suggested 'Tearful Shadows. So this chapter will consist of the girls' day, also this is not just any original ball story, it'll take you off guard in the later chapter!
Without further ado here goes the chapter:
Please review!
A Nightmare at the Ball
Getting the dresses
Chapter 1-
"How about this?" Hikaru asked as she pulled out a dress from the rack.
Dazzling beadwork on the waist and the single strap adds a dose of sparkle to this phenomenal one shoulder party dress for prom. A flirtatious baby doll dress with a short ball gown style skirt completes the look with stunning layers of voluminous tulle fabric that's full and fabulous. This extraordinary short one shoulder short dress lets you shine bright on your prom night in aqua color.
"That's for prom, not a ball." Madoka added as she pulled out a dress from the rack. "How about this one?"
This is sexy strapless sequin dress by Night Moves. A daring evening gown for prom featuring a sweetheart neckline on the seductive sheer bodice and a floor length skirt drenched in liquid sequins. This dress is for black tie affairs or prom and has a sultry style that will make any fashion diva feel sexy.
"And it only comes in black and blue, so what do you think?" Madoka asked the girls. "Not really Madoka, it's to slutty! I mean I want to dance and have fun not show half of my stomach!" Hikaru added as she looked at the girls. Sophie nodded her head and added. "Yeah, I agree!"
Hikaru was looking at the dresses and her eyes landed on the most beautiful dress for Sophie.
"Hey Sophie, how about this one?" Hikaru asked as she pulled out a dress.
"No way, how about you try this?" Sophie took out a dress and handed it to Hikaru.
Sweetheart neckline with rhinestone spaghetti straps and neckline trim, A.B.. rhinestone detail on bust, gold and matching sequin bodice with tulle full mermaid skirt with train.
"This is beautiful. I'll try it on!" Hikaru added and went into the changing room. Madoka turned around and gave Sophie a dress.
Classic styling, luxurious fabrics and brilliant beadwork give this strapless evening gown an impressive style for your prom or formal occasion. A stunning beaded prom dress with a ruched bodice featuring a sweetheart neckline and open back. The floor length skirt flares at the hip with a small train that completes the look.
"Isn't that for prom?" Sophie asked as Madoka nodded, "So what if it is? It's still sexy and hot!" Madoka motioned for Sophie to go in the changing room. Madoka then went to look for a dress for her. 'A girl has to have standards. I wonder what Gingka will wear?' Ohh I bet it's going to be red, so that'll be my dress color.' Madoka thought to herself as she took out a dress.
A dazzlingly bright, beautiful, long, sexy dress in colorful jersey fabric with sparkling jewels on the single strap that wraps around to frame the sexy open back. Cut out sides, a ruched sweetheart bodice, and a long glamorous train give this amazing one shoulder evening gown a ravishing look that will land you on everyone's best dressed list.
'Perfect!' Madoka thought to herself, as Hikaru exited from the changing room.
"So?" Hikaru asked as she twirled around. Madoka grinned and nodded her head.
"Perfect!" Madoka commented, "And I think Kyoya will love this dress! Surely he won't be that oblivious." Madoka finished as Hikaru was blushing, "I'll go change and buy this dress." Hikaru made a run for it as Sophie came out looking beautiful.
"That is the dress for you! Now go change and buy it!" Madoka commented as she did what she was told to do.
`Well it's my turn.' Madoka got in the changing room and stripped herself to nothing but her bra and underwear. 'Well it better look good.' She dressed and got out looking at her friends with shopping bags in their hands.
"Madoka, it's amazing, Gingka will look awesome with you!" Hikaru added as Sophie finished "Yes he might actually ask you out, that is, if you go!" Madoka nodded.
"So what's next?" Hikaru asked Sophie as Madoka went to buy the dress. "I'm not sure but we do need shoes, and I need a push up bra." Sophie added as she pointed to the Victoria's Secret shop. Madoka came up to them. " Hey I need a push up bra. The dress will look better if I have one that pushes up my boobs!" Hikaru giggled. "We'll if I want Kyoya's eyes on me; I suppose I do need a push up bra. And how about when we're done we go shopping for shoes?" Hikaru asked as they all walked towards the shop.
When they arrived at the shop, Hikaru immediately went to the push up section and took out a strapless bra. "What do you guys think?" She motionedto the bra to Madoka and Sophie. Sexy, any way you wear it. The Very Sexy Multi-Way gives you the lift and cleavage you love, with all-new plush padding for the sexiest shape imaginable and unbelievable push-up. With a plunge front and glamorous little touches like a sparkling center rhinestone, it's a must for low-cut necklines.
"And it's good with our dresses!" Hikaru added as she pulled out 3 bras. Madoka nodded and took a bra with her size while Sophie went to the cashiers. Then the girls were met with a line which was taking a little time. "So, I hope Gingka will look at my curves, and then he'll ask me to dance with him, and then he'll do the most romantic thing ever; kiss me slowly. And at the end he'll pull me closer to him and whisper something sweet in my ear." Madoka finished, daydreaming as the 2 girls giggled."Yeah, he'll say: My my, Madoka you look sexy, How about I fuck you right here and now?" Hikaru mimicked Gingka's voice while Sophie was giggling hard.
"But no really, I wish that Kyoya will look at my eyes, and he'll never look away. And then he'll ask me to dance, and when I refuse he'll pull me to the dance floor, not giving me a chance. And if a girl asks to cut in and dance with Kyoya, I'll try to move but Kyoya will pull me closer. OHHH I wish he'll ask me out." Hikaru finished as Madoka gave her a 'good luck' sign. When they were finished paying their money for the bras, Hikaru pulled the girls to a shoe shop.
Madoka pulled out a pair of shoes for Hikaru. "Try these." Madoka shoved the shoes in her hands.
The features for these heels include a satin fabric upper with a crochet overlay, semi pointed closed toe, scoop vamp, smooth lining, and cushionedfoot bed. Approximately 6 1/2 inch heels and 2 1/2 inch platforms. Blue.
"Thanks they look perfect and the same color as my dress." Hikaru got up and tried the shoes on, loving how they made her legs look. She cupped her face and went into a fangirl moment.
When Hikaru was back to reality, she chirped in "Hey Madoka I'll get you your shoes." Hikaru then went to an aisle and grabbed a pair of shoes.
The features for these heels include a satin fabric upper with a crochet overlay, semi pointed closed toe, scoop vamp, smooth lining, and cushionedfoot bed. Approximately 6 1/2 inch heels and 2 1/2 inch platforms. Pink.
Madoka squeaked as she tried them on and loved them. Then they both offered to get Sophie a pair of high heels. That is when Hikaru's eyes landed on the perfect shoes for her.
The features for these heels include a faux suede upper in a pump design with faceted beaded detailing, almond shaped closed toe, scoop vamp, smooth lining, and cushioned foot bed. Approximately 6 inch heels and 2 inch covered platforms. Black.
"Perfect." Sophie said as she got up to try them on. "I wish that if Kyoya kisses, me my right leg will kick up!" Hikaru said as she looked at her shoes. Madoka giggled. "Yeah and the boy behind you will get his nuts damaged as you push them with your high heels." Sophie giggled louder as Hikaru blushed. "Hey, a girl can dream!" Hikaru started to laugh imagining the way she will crush some poor guy's nuts.
"So, now it's time to go pick how to style our hair. How about we buy magazines and we can style our own hair. I mean, why waste the money!" Hikaru asked, and the girls nodded.
"Ok but whose house?" Madoka asked. "Not mine…the boys are crashing at my house with my dad and Gingka's dad, including all the legendary bladers. So whose house?" Madoka finished. "How about mine?" Hikaru asked. "Marik won't be home today so he won't bug us, and I'll tell my dad to go with my director and Madoka's dad." Hikaru suggested as they got in Hikaru's blue convertible. They all nodded.
Once the girls got settled in Hikaru's house, they immediately went in her room, bringing all the bags up there.
"So? How about this one for your hair, Madoka?!" Hikaru asked as she pointed at a picture.
A sophisticated blow-out and lots—lots—of volumizing products can create a feathered bob.
"And look here!It tells us how to do it." Hikaru bunched up the magazine that was laying on the floor and moved her cup of ice cream and started to read.
"How to do it: Start with a great, layered cut a few weeks before prom (if your daughter likes this 'do, show the stylist the picture)." She then paused and showed them the picture then continued "The layers are necessary to create the "feathers," or floaty flips of hair. To get the look, blow-dry hair with a volumizing mousse and round brush, and then work in a texturizing product with a bit of hold. Curl strands outward with a large-barrel curling iron. Spritz with hairspray so the wisps don't fall during the night." Hikaru finished looking at Madoka who was grinning in response.
"I love it! Ok my turn! Sophie, how about this one?" Madoka asked as she was laying on her bed. She moved her ice cream and showed it to Sophie.
To get the perfect sexy, of-the-moment braid, your hair should have lots of body before you start. Use plenty of mousse throughout (A/N: I like Garnier Fructis Style Volume Inject Mousse, $4-$10 depends on we're you get it.) and a root lifter at the scalp for ultimate volume. If your hair is fine, you may even want to set it with Velcro rollers before you begin.
"And this is how you do it." Madoka sat up on Hikaru's bed and started to read.
"How to do it: Make a deep side part. Pro tip: If you normally wear your hair to the left, switch to the right, and vice versa. Styling your hair in the opposite direction of what it's used to will give a bit of natural lift at the root, says Maggiore. Gather hair at the base of the neck and make a loose braid. Use an elastic the same color as your hair for a softer look. Then, with fingers, tug and separate the braid all over so it becomes messy and uneven—this final part is the key to the updated 'do. Sounds easy…what do you think Sophie?" Hikaru snatched the magazine from Madoka and looked at the picture. "It's called a braid of glory. And it would look good with your dress." Hikaru finished as Sophie nods.
"Ok now it's my turn. Hikaru, how about this?" Sophie asked as she pulled the magazine to Hikaru's face. "This one is a cute short choppy haircut with great blue details. Looking cute and assertive was never this easy, you know." she finished. "Though it doesn't have a how to do section, but it looks easy. I mean, all we have to do is straighten it first then at the edge you twist it, and we can add stuff to your hair. What do you say?" Sophie asked Hikaru. "Sure it looks nice!" Hikaru then got up.
"Come on guys, it's time to watch some scary movies! My dad and brother aren't here so let's go watch Saw 3. I heard they said it was the scariest movie!" Hikaru finished as she adjusted her baby blue shirt, and dusted off her black shorts. The girls followed after.
"Don't you guy think it's a little odd that all of a sudden the legendary bladers are recognized and a ball is being hosted just for them to celebrate?" Hikaru asked as she put away her envelope. "Yeah, but my dad said that it could have ended the whole world if it weren't for the guys! So I guess they can have fun there." Madoka said as she put in the movie.
"Yeah but still…a ball? What's going on!?" Sophie chirped in. "But I wouldn't mind shopping again like today!" She finished as Madoka joined the 2 girls on her couch with all the receits in her hand.
"If you guys say so. Hey we spent about $ 345.33 today!" She looked happy, as Hikaru chirped in, "ok ok, hush the movie is starting." Then they were quiet as they watched the scary movie with no one but each other for company.
Ok guys, update will be here soon, until then give me some oc's to go out with the boys. Since Fatema wrote the whole story and I just added and changed the plot a little I let her pair the characters so here they are:
Kyoya x Hikaru
Gingka x Madoka
Sophie x Wales
Mei-Mei x Chao Xin
Nile x Ren (if you guys want Nile just pm me)
the free people are listed down:
Tithi
Yu
Tsubasa
Masamune
Toby
Chris
Bao
Ryo
(Madoka's dad)
Zeo
Jack
Ziggy (Why not?)
Aguma
Yuki
Da Xiang
Benkei
Kenta
and the person you all have been waiting for: RYUGA!
So just send your oc clearly and spell the character's name correctly (Since I'm not so good) and until then I'll update soon, if you want a character that I didn't list just pm me :))
thanks a whole bunch to Fatema and Tearful Shadows. You two rock!