Angels P.O.V

Im a 17 Year old girl and my car a dodge stratus is of course BROKEN so im planning on taking it to that new auto shop down the street with the new mechanic" Mom im leaving to get my car fixed bye" I yell running out the door into my car. Im driving down the paved road then i see it Sonic's Cars. Then i see the mechanic working on a car. He looks about 17 like me and he is grey or black but I cant tell theres oil or grease all over him. I pull up behind him and tap his shoulder. "um exuse me are you the mechanic?" I ask he wipes his hands off and puts his hand out "Yep im Slate The hedgehog how can I help you" he says and I shake his hand "Well theres a light on my dash board and i dont know what it means" I point to my car. he hops in it and drives it into his work space "come here ill show you how to fix this if it happens again" he says pulling me to my car. My car is lifted with a jack and he grabs a wrench kit and a couple board with wheel thingys "here lay on this" he says I lay on it and he lays on the other and wheels us under my car "You see your filter needs a repair so hold on" he pulls out a greased up cylinder thing "okay your gonna have to buy a new one if you buy from us ill give you the repair free so you wont have to come back hows that"he asks me I nod giving him a 20 doller bill and he grabs a brand new cylinder thing "okay now here" he puts the filter in my hand and moves my arm up "okay I want you to screw the filter right there okay like a a screw driver exept your hand is doing it okay"He says poilitly and I nod and screw it slowly "you gotta put it on tight or it will fall off while yor driving okay" He says looking at my hands "okay its on" I say quietly "nice job well there ya go your car is fine now"he says patting my back he removes his gloves and puts the 20 in the register "well bye" He says waving "WAIT i want to thank you for giving me the fix free so would you like to go to dinner at my house were having BBq ribs" I ask "Well sure when like 6:00" Wow he read my mind "yea see you then" I say driving off in my new car

7:59

I am ready for that nice boy to come for dinner then DING-DONG. The door bell rings "Ill get it mom and dad" I say opening the door to a Grey Hedgehog in a black shirt and blue jeans"Hiya" He says putting his right hand up "Oh hi Slate come on in and meet my family" I say as he walks in" this is my dad Paul my mom Katie and my Sister Amy" I say "Oh speaking of family i brought my boss slash best friend Sonic" A blue hedgehog walks in "hey guys names Sonic Sonic the hedgehog"He says waving we all go and sit at the table

6:15

"So me and Sonic try to get the car to fit in our workspace but of course it didnt then a bar falls and hits me and my life flashes before my eyes and im bored" Slate was telling a story about this SUV then every one started lagughing "Well its about time me and Sonic hit the road" Slate says looking at his watch "NO DONT GO" Me and Amy yell covoring our mouths. Sonic and Slate look at us "Well okay I guess me and Sonic can stay a little longer" he says sitting down

6:20

"Slate would you like to see my room" I ask him "uhhh sure why not" he says standing up and I pull him up the stairs He sits in the chair and sit on my bed" nice little pad you got here a tv computer and a mini fridge" he says looking around "So Slate just asking do you have a girlfriend" I see Slates face go from a HI to a WHAT face "uhhh no why" he awnswers "no reason just because i kinda... um (gulp) like you?" I say flinching but insted of him talking he HUGS me and I hug back "Aye Slate you redy to g-" Sonic came in right as he was hugging me "WHOO GO SLATE ROCK HER WORLD!" He yells then slate and I fall off my bed "Oh CRAP" slate yells falling on the floor and me landing on top of him "Sonic im gonna kill you now seeya later angel im having a lunch break at 11:00 tomarrow you should come ill meet you a taco bell cya now SONIC GET BACK HERE SO I CAN SNAP YOUR NECK" he yells running after sonic and me laughing "bye HA HA Slate HA HA

first chapter of the Mechanic what ya think well cya