This is my first fanfic ever! Please review, and if it sucks, let me know. I don't own the movie or Paramount Pictures, but I do own the characters I'm adding to the story XD. P.S: the entire story is Camera P.O.V.
Paranormal Activity: 5 years later – Chapter 1
(The writer of this fanfic would like to thank the families of the deceased and SDPD for providing this footage).
(Day 1 – September 1st, 2011)
(12:00 PM. Camera turns on, showing a white blonde girl in a green bedroom. She has 2 small yet visible pink strands of hair, and 2 green. Her deep blue eyes are looking at the camera, with a beautiful smile)
Jenny: Hi, I'm Jenny. I'm 19 from California. I moved to this new place with my boyfriend Eddie a few weeks ago. For the past week some weird things are going on here. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's really scary. Let's go downstairs.
(Jenny picks the camera up, leaves the room and goes downstairs. The viewers are now aware that this is the house from the original Paranormal Activity. We see a young man with a pointy haircut and a black t-shirt playing a shooting game on a PS3)
Eddie: (looks completely unaware to Jenny's presence, shooting a group of people) Yea! You got owned, noobs! Headshot!
Jenny: Eddie, can you please say hi to the camera?
Eddie: (still not looking at Jenny) Hi, camera.
Jenny: (zooms on his face) come on! Leave the game for 5 minutes and look at the camera. Please!
Eddie: (grunts) Fine. (Looks at the camera) Wow, what's up with that giant camera?
Jenny: What? It's nothing too much.
Eddie: (looks at the camera, rolls his eyes and looks unhappy) how much does it cost?
Jenny: Forget it…
Eddie: How… Much…?
Jenny: 300$
Eddie: You… (Looks shocked) You spent 300$ on a fucking camera? You lost it!
Jenny: (Zooms out) Calm down, Ed. I thought it would be cool to see all those creepy things that are going around here the last few days. Looks, it's a really cool one (playing with the zoom, laughing)
Eddie: (shocking his head, chuckling) you are unbelievable. (He gives her a kiss. Taking the camera) OK, this is awesome. (Zooms on Jenny's face).
Jenny: Give it back.
Eddie: Say "please".
Jenny: (rolls her eyes, looking at the camera) please.
Eddie: Now, give the camera a kiss, baby.
Jenny: I'm not kissing a camera. You're nuts.
Eddie: Come on, one little kiss.
Jenny: No way.
Eddie: Fine. (Gives her the camera) Come on, show me pawning some noobs on "black ops". (Grabs joystick starts playing, shooting lots of enemies).
Jenny: (laughs) you are addicted to that stupid machine.
Eddie: (Looks at her) I'm not addicted to them. I'm in love with them.
Jenny: And what am I?
Eddie: (looks at her) you… you are a… (Looks at screen) oh crap, I just lost.
Jenny: (after a moment of silence) But seriously, you're not scared of all those footsteps noises and slamming doors, and electricity going on and off for no reason?
Eddie: It's probably one of those kids spying on you. You are just too hot.
Jenny: (in a questioning voice) you got a problem with that?
Eddie: No… I just think you are overreacting about a little kid that's stalking you and probably masturbating on a naked picture of you.
Jenny: (punches him in the arm) you are SO grouse!
Eddie: (laughs) no I'm not. You are (starts kissing her). (camera cuts off).
3 Hours later
(3:00 PM. Camera is showing Jenny in a tank top and sweat pants listening to some music from a laptop. The camera approaches her slowly).
Eddie: What are you doin, Jen?
Jenny: (takes out her headphones) I'm looking for something.
Eddie: What's that?
Jenny: Someone that can tell us what the hell is going on here.
Eddie: (Camera zooms on the screen) you're looking for a psychic?
Jenny: Well… I'm sure it's not a kid.
Eddie: (Camera is back on Jenny's face) you are completely insane. It's one of the kids here, or something.
Jenny: I don't know. Why would a kid do that? It would be a little weird for a kid.
Eddie: Hey, I used to spy on my English teacher when I was young. Kids do crazy things.
Jenny: Well, maybe you're right. But if it won't stop in a few days, were getting a psychic. OK?
Eddie: Fine.
(Camera catches a shadow that does not belong to any of the furniture's on the wall).
Jenny: That's weird…
Eddie: What?
Jenny: The music, it stopped.
Eddie: (trying not to laugh) that usually happens when the song is over, Jenny.
Jenny: (Looks at him, kinda mad) I'm serious. All I can hear is statics.
Eddie: Let me hear (taking the headphones) (the shadow looks like a human for a few seconds, and then it disappears).
Eddie: Here, it's all better. Probably the headphones are broken or something.
Jenny: Maybe. But, they are new. I bought them yesterday.
Eddie: Just forget it, let's watch TV or something. (Camera turns off).
Sometime later
(12:00 AM. We see Jenny adjusting the camera on a tripod. It's in the same location of the camera in the original PA. Eddie is lying on the bed, watching a random TV show).
Jenny: (with her tongue sticking out of her mouth) and… (Stops moving the camera) there. Now we can see anything that would try to get into our room. And we can hear if someone is downstairs.
Eddie: I still think you are overreacting about something completely normal.
Jenny: We'll see about that. (Laying on the bed, turning out the lights).
(Camera goes into fast forward. Stops at 3:16:45)
(For a few moments, nothing happens. Then, there is a voice of heavy footsteps, going slowly upstairs. The shadow of a human appears yet again on the door. It's simply there, not moving or doing anything. The shadows gender is unknown, but it's too big to be a kid. There are some whispers, too weak to determine their language. After a minute or so, the shadow slowly fades, and the heavy footsteps are back, when they reach the bottom of the stairs, they disappear).
(Jenny gets up for a sec, looks around for a moment or 2, and then goes back to sleep). (Camera fades out).
Well, this is it. My very first fanfic. Hope you like it. When I'll have enough positive reviews, I'll upload the next chapter. I don't know how much is enough, but you'll know when :P oh, and let me know if there are any typos.