TMNT: Raphael's vendetta

Prologue: the obedience curse

It was a long night for the turtles, and splinter had gone on some meditative retreat so the turtles would be left alone for two whole weeks. Leonardo was left in charge of his brothers for those two weeks and he intended to use all his spare time practicing his katas, while Donatello planned to work on his projects, and Michealangelo planned on playing his video games, and Raphael planned to get as much rest as he could. little did the four brothers know, that Leo would end up in deep trouble for the next two weeks.

Leonardo was trying to sleep. he truly was. but, he felt an unidentified presence in his bedroom. As far as he could tell, there was no one in his room, but he could not shake the feeling that there was indeed someone in his room, watching him.

"Is there someone there? Alright Raph, stop joking around."

"I am not the one you call 'Raph'. I am the one called kronos. a ninja sorcerer. I have been dead for 1,000 years. I have been watching you, Leonardo for days now. I have witnessed the rivalry that you have with your brother, the one called Raphael. You do nothing but fight and order him around. You will finally know just how it feels to be ordered around, and not having the choice to refuse and being forced to obey against your will. This is the lesson you must learn, Leonardo. You must learn this lesson on your own. I give you the curse of obedience. Goodbye."

"Ok. i seriously need to stop drinking Donnie's coffee before bed."


chapter one: Raphael's discovery

Leo woke up the next morning feeling fine, and thinking that the ghost he had heard the night before had all been a dream. He went in the kitchen to see that his brothers were already there eating, except of course Raphael. he was not in a very good mood that morning, for Mikey had been up half the night playing his video games and had kept Raph awake. he decided that he needed to let his anger out, so he took it out on leo.

"LEO! GO GET ME SOME PIZZA OUT OF THE FRIDGE!" Raph commanded.

Leo felt an odd sensation in his body, as if he were a puppet on strings. he walked towards the fridge and got Raph what he had wanted. He had no idea why he had obeyed Raph's command. He had no clue as to why he would do such a thing in the first place. Nobody had noticed this reaction from Leo...atleast nobody except Raph of course. He realised that something was up...and he was going to test his theory.

"Leo, meet me in my room in 30 minutes. I have some things i wish to talk to you about." Raph ordered. Leo again felt that odd sensation in his body that some how wanted him to obey raph. He just hoped that Donnie and Mikey did not discover his new found obedience to commands as Raphael obviously had already done. Leo didn't know it, but his whole life and his freedom were about to be taken from him by his own brother.


Raph realised that something was very off about Leo. Usually Leo would have told him to screw off, but he actually obeyed his command. He realized that he needed to test his theory before jumping to conclusions. Raph had only seen this kind of attitude from the film 'Ella Enchanted'. Ella was given the gift of obedience, and she had been forced to obey any order or command given to her. If Leo was indeed showing signs of having this curse, then he has found his ticket of gaining Leo as a personal slave for the next two weeks.

"I could make Leo do anything I want. He would have no choice. He would make a perfect slave. But i will have to test this theory first. Here he comes now."

"Alright Raph, I'm here. What do you need to speak to me about?

"Well, i wanted to talk to you about your attitude just a little while ago. You would have normally told me to screw off, but you actually obeyed my order. Why is that?"

"Well...I could tell you were in a bad mood, so i just did as you asked."

"That's not it. You seemed liked you were unable to control your actions, at all."

This is it. time to see if this theory is true.

"Leo, pat your head" Raph commanded. Leo did indeed pat his head. Leo gave Raph a look of horror on his face.

"Now, rub your tummy at the same time" Raph commanded again. Leo had no choice, but to obey his command.

"Now, jump up and down" Raph commanded, yet again. Leo did as he was told. He realized the look of complete cruelty in Raph's eyes. He also realized that Raph had some terrible plan for him.

"This is awesome! It seems Leo, that you have to obey any order given to you, no matter what the command is. I now have the perfect slave to do all of my work for me."

"If you think I am going to allow you to treat me like some sort of puppet Raph, your out of your mind!"

"Well, you have no choice. If you do not, I could always just tell Donnie and Mikey of this situation. I am certain that they would love to hear all about this."

"NO! Please Raph, don't! I'll do anything you want me to do! Just please, don't tell the others about this! Please Raph, I'm begging you!" Leo cried. He realized that Raph now held the key to his freedom, and that Raph had just locked up his freedom. He realized that the ghost he had heard last night was no dream after all. It really happened. And if he wanted Donnie and Mikey not to know about this, he would have to become Raph's personal slave until splinter returned. He would have to become Raph's puppet.

"What would you do to not get me to tell them of your...situation?"

"Anything, Raphael...Anything! Now, would you please allow me to stop?"

"Very well, you may stop now."

"Thank you. Why Raph? Why would you want me, for your slave?"

"Because, you are the one that has to obey every order your given. you are the one with this curse. Besides, you are the one that I would rather use anyway."

"You would use your own brother this way? How do you think i feel about this?"

"Does it matter how you feel? You wil come to me when ever i call you, whether you like it or not. You no longer have a choice."

"If that is what you want, Raph then I will do as you wish, if only to keep Donnie and MIkey from finding out about this curse."

"Excellent. Your duties begin at noon. Enjoy your last moments of peace, Leo. You won't have time to relax after this moment."