Um, this is a teaser. It will be yaoi (1x2). I'm just posting it to see if I should continue the story. So,
here ya go...
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Prologue
The dark figure felt comfortable in the darkness of the alley. The moon had scared away the sun,
allowing only its amount of light to be shone against half the Earth. It dominated that half, and the
figure was glad for it. Chasing away the light had been something he wished he could do himself,
but it wasn't possible. He may not be mortal, but he wasn't the moon. Closing his eyes he leaned
against the cool wall letting the shadows envelope him, taking him away from the sight of anyone
who might have passed by. Suddenly, he felt something change in the atmosphere and he slowly
opened his eyes to see what it was. His cobalt blue orbs rested upon a slim young man with a
long chestnut braid walking through the alley. There was something different about this man, he
smelled different. Intrigued by him the immortal being followed the man, never leaving the
shadows. That's when he noticed them. The rare violet eyes, the ones he had been searching for.
Was this boy truly the one? He stepped out of the shadows, revealing himself. This seemed to
have startled the young man because he instantly grabbed for the cross around his neck and held
it out toward the figure as if to shield himself. "Who are you?" he stammered, his violet eyes
darting back and forth over the being's body.
The figure just stared at the boy with his dark blue eyes, a playful smirk sliding over his face. He
could hear the beating of the others heart speed up, his blood running faster throughout his body.
Seeing that he was in no harm he cocked his head to the side and stared at the boy shockingly.
"You? YOU are the one?"
"What are you talking about?" the violet eyed boy asked as his hands began to tremble.
The mysterious immortal snorted and his eyes glazed over in a dark red color before turning back
to normal, making the other boy gasp. "Your telling the truth...I guess even death forgets." As the
words left his lips he was startled to see the young boy's eyes roll back into his head as he
withered to the ground. The dark figured groaned. He leaned over and gathered the limp body in
his arms and began walking back toward the alley. As he disappeared into the darkness his final
words echoed in the air.
"I better get paid extra for this."
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Please review it. Even if its the worst comment ever, I still would appreciate it. I like writing, its
nothing I want to do for a career, so please respond honestly. I would also like some help on how
to make this better. All comments are GREATLY appreciated.
here ya go...
~*~
Prologue
The dark figure felt comfortable in the darkness of the alley. The moon had scared away the sun,
allowing only its amount of light to be shone against half the Earth. It dominated that half, and the
figure was glad for it. Chasing away the light had been something he wished he could do himself,
but it wasn't possible. He may not be mortal, but he wasn't the moon. Closing his eyes he leaned
against the cool wall letting the shadows envelope him, taking him away from the sight of anyone
who might have passed by. Suddenly, he felt something change in the atmosphere and he slowly
opened his eyes to see what it was. His cobalt blue orbs rested upon a slim young man with a
long chestnut braid walking through the alley. There was something different about this man, he
smelled different. Intrigued by him the immortal being followed the man, never leaving the
shadows. That's when he noticed them. The rare violet eyes, the ones he had been searching for.
Was this boy truly the one? He stepped out of the shadows, revealing himself. This seemed to
have startled the young man because he instantly grabbed for the cross around his neck and held
it out toward the figure as if to shield himself. "Who are you?" he stammered, his violet eyes
darting back and forth over the being's body.
The figure just stared at the boy with his dark blue eyes, a playful smirk sliding over his face. He
could hear the beating of the others heart speed up, his blood running faster throughout his body.
Seeing that he was in no harm he cocked his head to the side and stared at the boy shockingly.
"You? YOU are the one?"
"What are you talking about?" the violet eyed boy asked as his hands began to tremble.
The mysterious immortal snorted and his eyes glazed over in a dark red color before turning back
to normal, making the other boy gasp. "Your telling the truth...I guess even death forgets." As the
words left his lips he was startled to see the young boy's eyes roll back into his head as he
withered to the ground. The dark figured groaned. He leaned over and gathered the limp body in
his arms and began walking back toward the alley. As he disappeared into the darkness his final
words echoed in the air.
"I better get paid extra for this."
~*~
Please review it. Even if its the worst comment ever, I still would appreciate it. I like writing, its
nothing I want to do for a career, so please respond honestly. I would also like some help on how
to make this better. All comments are GREATLY appreciated.