100 Years Late

by Onira

Plot roughs of a story that I plan to make into a comic. Please critique for concepts rather than mechanics.

1. Preface

Let me put all the chapters that follow into context before we continue.

I am working on the writing segment of a Doctor Who animated comic, but I am hardly a writer and I want to run these plots by some people before taking the absurd amount of time necessary to illustrate them. These are very rough, a fact for which I apologize. I'll do my best to be as clear as possible in communicating what's going on. For the most part I'm really only looking for plot holes, things that don't fit, etc. Any assistance with that in review form would be greatly appreciated.

Everything takes place between when Sigma tells the 10th Doctor that his song is coming to an end, and when he returns 100 years late.

Allons-y!