Okay, my first fan fiction ever.
And well I can say that I tried my best with writing it in English and so on but there is mistakes. And plz, tell me about them! I wanna get better on writing in English.

This is first part, so there's coming more. I've written chapther two already, just have to do some editing and then I'll upload that too.
I hope I have some readers for this.. Is readers even a word? O.O

Anyway. So, about the storyline.
This is kind of: After the seventh season.
Luke & Lorelai are married and Rory has a job from New York Times.. ^^

Okay, tell me what you think of this (:

Chapther one: Burning like a piece of paper

"Really go now, I can take care of the place couple hours", Lorelai says.
Luke sighs. "I can't believe that the only time I really need Caesar, he's out off town. He's never out off town", he says with a frustration in his voice.
Lorelai starts pushing Luke to the door.
"He's been here for years, and this is the only time he asks couple days off", she says.
"Hey, you're pushing me", Luke says and tries to turn over.
"I've been here before. Just go to Harford to get things you need, and come back and if the place is burned, I'll build new one with my very own hands", Lorelai says, and openes the door for Luke. He nods his head a bit. "Fair enough. But the main point is that you need to be careful."
"I will be."

"You promise?"

"I promise!"
Luke smiles, wraps his arms around her and kisses her. After that he puts his arms to Lorelai's stomach for a second and kisses her quickly again.
"Be careful", he says again and then leaves. Lorelai stays on the door now holding her stomach wich has grown up a little already.
She has a happy smile on her face as she closes the door.

Lorelai is closing up the place when her cell phone rings.

She sits on a table and answers to Rory.
"Hello mom", she says.
"Honey! Hi! How are you?", Lorelais is happy that Rory calls her.
"Everything's fine. Is it okay if I'm come home this weekend?", Rory asks. She lives in New York and works for The Times.
"Of course! I'm glad that you're finally coming!", Lorelai says and smiles now.
"Good. So, how's it with you?", Rory asks then.
""Everything's fine. Luke went to Hardford to get some things and I'm taking care of the diner.. He actually should be here any minute now", Lorelai says and takes a look at the clock. Luke has been gone longer than he said he would be.
"Oh, that's cool. Hey btw, how's it with town finally knowing about..", Rory says but Lorelai interrupts her.
"My pregnancy? Oh, well, you know. They were really stoked as you can guess", Lorelai says.
"Really mom? Just stoked?", Rory says with a bit of sarcasm of her voice.
"Well, Kirk wanted to be godfather.. When we said "no but thanks", he started crying", Lorelai says and shakes her head.
"Why's that such a big deal to him?", Rory asks.

"Oh, well. He's been keeping eye on our eating habits and looks like we're gonna die before he does, so when we do, he'll get the child. This way he doesn't have to get own kids. And since Luke's teeth looks good to him, and I'm pretty and not too fat at all, he thinks the child is gonna be perfectly fine..", Lorelai explain's with a tiny smile.

"That's a one freaky town", Rory laughs.
"Yeah, hey, there's someone on the another line. Can you wait?", Lorelai says. She takes another look at the clock.
"Sure."

"Hello?", Lorelai answeres on the phone.
"Hello, am I talking with mrs. Lorelai Gilmore?", man on the phone asks with gentle, soft voice. A bit too soft.
Lorelai has chills over her body. She hates when some one calls her "mrs".
But since she doesn't know the man who she's talking to,

she just answers with short "yes."
"I am doctor Collins from Hardford's University Hospital and I'm affraid I have got some bad news.. Your husband, Lucas Danes, was in a really bad car accident, and there was nothing wich could have safe him.."'

Lorelai drops the phone off her hand.

Day is turning into a night and dark comes.

She looks so weak as she sits alone in the dark.

So broken.

"Mrs. Gilmore? Are you still there?"