Yo dudes and dudettes! Welcome to my new story...: Hidden Emotions. Written by me: Kendahl. Big fan of Maximum Ride. Of course. And all of these...are based off of Maximum Ride and their scenes from book 1-4 and soon book 5. And all of these scenes...are from the books. Not me! ...except when they get to the point...where I make my own up. But I'm not JP. Don't claim to be, and all credit goes to this genius! Besides Fang's thoughts...those seem to be mine...well some of them...or most of them...or YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! But all the scenes are written by JP. Thanks guys! And please...don't be too harsh. This does happen to be my first Maximum Ride Story...and soon will be more...and some will be Iggy's POV if I can think of a few story ideas. Hehehe...
Chapter 1 (First scene starts at chapter 2 or 3...pg 10 so chapter 3)
Another day...another boring, day. I woke up, got dressed and headed out into the kitchen. I looked at Max. She was in the fridge. I walked towards her...looking in the fridge as well and then she spun around, "Would you quit that?" she said looking at me, giving me that glare. That's just Max. I stared back, calmly.
"Quit what?" I said, looking at her. "Breathing?" I held in a laugh.
She rolled her eyes, as she always does. "You know what." Know what, what? Ha...
I looked over at Iggy. Greatest cook ever, as to Max who couldn't even make a peanut butter and jelly sandwich. Think about it... a blind dude, whose a better cook than Max the Great!
"I'll make eggs." he announced. No shocker there. It's not like Max would make some eggs...that'll be the day...
"Fang? You set the table. I'll go get Nudge and Angel." Max told me. I got out 6 plates, noticing that there were already 6 cups of juice out on the table. I looked over at Gazzy who was watching TV. Then, put some napkins and forks on top. Then, I joined Gazzy at the TV.
We all started to eat breakfast, which happened to be delish, as always. But then of course..."I want to go pick strawberries today," Angel said firmly, as she put some eggs on her fork. "They're ripe now." she explained. No freaking duh1
"Okay, Angel, I'll go with you," the Gasman said, as he did...he ripped one, and giggled.
"Oh, jeez, Gazzy." Max said disgusted.
"Gas...mask!" Iggy choked. Pretending to be as if he was to asphyxiate.
"Im done," I said disgusted. I got up quickly and took my plate to the sink.
"Sorry," the Gasman said. Not a shocker. He's always an innocent guy...but...gross.
"Yeah, Angel," said Nudge. "I think the fresh air would do us all good. I'll go too." No kidding...
"We'll all go." Max announced. Of course...Max wouldn't let Angel go alone...
We all carried some bucket and baskets..ha "a tisket a basket, a green and yellow basket..." (a/n: just had to put that one in there...make it funny from Fang's POV) Angel somehow knew where a patch of wild strawberries were. I looked over at Angel.
She grabbed Max's hand as usual. "If you make a cake, I can make strawberry shortcakes," she said happily. Why is she so happy? You're talking to MAX. The Max who can't cook. Why the hell would you ask Max too cook cakes? But apparentally Iggy was reading my mind...no wait that's Angel...
"Yeah, that'll be the day, when Max makes a cake," Iggy said, No..Igg, It's it'll be the the day when Max can make a cake. "I'll make it Angel." That's a better idea...no offense Max.
"Oh, thank you!" "Max" exclaimed. "Okay, I'm not a fabulous cook. But I can still kick your butt, and don't you forget it!" HA!
Iggy was laughing, holding his hands in denial. Nudge was holding in a laugh, and I was grinning, holding in my laughter. We all looked at Gazzy, who look...mischievous.
"Was that you?" Max asked, looking suspicious. No Max...it was a voice...
Gazzy grinned. Ha...nice kid. He didn't looked please with himself...but...what the heck. The boy had a talent. Since he was 3...and he worked it. Whatever...
Angel screamed in horror. What the-? I looked around, and there were Erasers, surrounding us. We all looked around, ready to fight. I stood there, calmly. All of us jumped at an erasers. They stunk...badly. I kicked him the the chest and he fell to the ground and got back up. Then I swung and hit him on the head...hard. Then...two Erasers ganged up on me, and I went down, flailing under clawed hands. I looked at Iggy who was upright, but his eye was swelling. I looked to see everyone. The Gasman was out...cold. lying on the ground, facedown. Ouch.
Max was being beaten the hell out of Erasers. Then I heard a familiar scream. Angel was screaming bloody murder, and Nudge was crying. They all out numbered us, and we were were all in pain. I got up and started to fight off more, but then I noticed Nudge being held by hand and feet. And swung her hard, and she went flying and hit a tree. And she was out...
"MAXXX!" Angel screamed, terrified. And an Eraser was holding her in his arms, and Max went after her. And watching this...terrible scene unravel. Angel...the baby of the flock...being taken away, by three Erasers. They stuffed her in a sack. Angel crying....
I looked at Max, seeing if she could do anything, "Get off me, you stupid, freaking-" she choked being slammed. Ouch...
"Max," he said. I looked at him? Who was this?
"Good to see you again," he began again, "You look like crap. You always acted so much better than everyone else, so this cheers me up." he said. I looked at him. He seemed familiar...
"You don't recognize me? I guess I've grown some." I looked at him. Max went wide. No...this can't be-
"Ari..." Max whispered. No way...Ari? They did this to a seven year old?!?! And...there was Max being in complete shock and...there she was getting kicked in the head and she was out cold. Gazzy, Iggy, Nudge, and I rushed over at Max.
"Max?" Gasman's voice said worried, scared, and innocent. Why did this have to happen!?
We looked down at her, worried. "I'm okay..." she croaked. That's good to know...but I don't believe her.
"Where's Angel?" she said, realizing everything that had just happened. ...Someone had to tell her...
"She's gone. They took her." I said, as calm as possible, still worried, and angry. She got up. Probably still dizzy.
"We've got to get her before they-" she stopped. Max...no. Don't...of course we have to get her...images filled my head. Smells filled my head. UGH!
"Check in guys - are you you up for a chase." she said. Oh yeah...
"Yes," Nudge said in a crackled voice.
"I'm up," Iggy said, he had a split lip. Poor guy.
Gazzy nodded. Just then...Iggy cocked her head. We all listened intently. "There!" he pointed, and we all saw a humvee. It was covered in dirt and mud, so you practically could tell it was black. It looked more brown...
"Let's get her!" and Max got up, running and began to fly. This was it....I watched her fly up chasing the humvee. I wanted to say Follow...but we all already knew, so went up and out. I grabbed a dead branch and smashed it into the window shield. The humvee stopped and swerved. Then, I heard the window rolling down and there was a gun barrel poking out. Oh hell no...
I smashed the window shield again. "ANGEL!" Max screamed again. "We're here. We're coming for you!" she said, worried, wanting to get our baby back.
"Up ahead!" I called. There was a greenish outline of a chopper. Max and I held eye contact, and I nodded. Easy...well maybe..
The humvee stopped suddenly. There was an Eraser burst out of the Humvee, and I jumped on him, then ...CRAP! Did he just bite me? Or did he scratch me? My arm oozed blood, dripping. Grenade blasted! I looked at Nudge seeing her grab Iggy's arm and pulling him out of the scene. There he was...Ari was out of the car and he was carrying the sack that held Angel. Max jumped furiously towards the chopper. Ari put her in the through the door. Max was desperate. Ari said something, "Let me tell you a secret, old pal, old chap," Ari yelled. Old pal? CHAP? You gotta be shittin me. "You've got it all wrong. We're the good guys." Are you kidding me? Ari, you're dead!
Max whispered something, and there Ari held out a gun. He wouldn't...he would. She let go. MAX NO!! She fell fast and landed.
We all watched the chopper flying away with Angel...our Angel! GOD!
"They have my sister!" The Gasman yelled in anger, frustration, and sorrow. Poor guy. I knelt down, wrapping my arm around him, comforting him.
"Max? What are we gonna do?" Nudge's eyes, looked scared, and worried, and filled with tears, ready to burst.
"The have Angel." No kidding? Max the great...UGH!
I looked at Max, who just flew away. She needed to think of a plan...quickly.
"Come on guys...let's go..." I said in anger, trying to calm myself, and flew up, not caring if they followed. I got home, in anger.
Iggy howled and swept his hand across the counter. Catapulting a mug, hitting me in the head.
"Watch it, Idiot!" I yelled, furiously. No...I didn't mean it. I clenched my teeth. MAX! WHY DID YOU LET THEM TAKE ANGEL! I looked at Max and rolled my eyes at her...WHY DID YOU LET THEM?!?!
"You watch it!" Iggy yelled back at me, "What happened? I mean, you guys can see, can't you? Why couldn't you get Angel?" Iggy shouted, mad as the rest of us. UGH!
"They had a chopper!" Gazzy said frightened. Getting away from Max, "And guns! We're not bulletproof!" he yelled. NO KIDDING GASMAN!??!
I'll keep writing. But...this is all from Max Ride. Just in Fang's POV. So that's the first few chapters. Hoped you liked it!
