So... if you've read this story before it was re written, you know that someone has noticed a flaw in my story about the OC's. Apparently, Fanfiction does not allow other members to participate in other member's stories. Therefore, I will be posting the OC forum ON MY PROFILE. it will be located below my regular info, so you might have to scroll down a teensy weensy bit. Just a little. Then PM the forum to me with any other story suggestions.

Anyways, there are exceptions if you are a 'Guest' or you just don't have an account here. I would be grateful if you could ask a friend that has an account to submit the forum using their account through PM or make an account for yourself. However, if all else fails, I will accept some guest OC's if they are in DETAIL.

But I don't want my story to be deleted... So yeah...


If you haven't read my story before this and you are just browsing, please feel free to submit a subbmission, I only have 5 as of 3-11-13.

Like I said, the submission forum is on my profile so please submit! But through PM!


If you already have submitted a forum, please re-submit it me through PM, I don't want to forget about it.


Here is an excerpt from the first chapter...

ENJOY!


Keiko's POV

I wake up to sunshine and birds chirping a beautiful tune. NOT. In reality, my eyes open, still crusted from sleep, to an annoying rooster and rain pattering on my window pane. Plus, this isn't "ooh rain, the kind that you can go dance out in and sing: I'm singing in the rain!" No, this is full on heavy drops of water, falling from black as sin clouds, (okay, maybe I'm exagerating), that if you went outside without and umbrella, you would most likely get hypothermia.

This is just great, a rainy day on my first day of school. This sucks to the most ability of sucking.

"Keiko! Akemi, my older sister shouts from her room. "C'mon! It's our first day of school!"
I groan. Ugh, I love Akemi as much as a sister can love her sister, but sometimes, she is sooooooooooooooooo annoying. That's why I prefer hanging out with my cousin, Yorumi.

Akemi is shy, timid and just plain nice, however, she can be a total pain at home with her oh-so-perfectness. Sure, she's nice to me and everything, but I always get irritated by her.

"One second!" I shout and begin to pick an outfit from my widely ranged closet, curtesy of my mother's occupation.

Oh, excuse my 'rudeness'. Here's a 'brief' introduction of my personal.

My name is Keiko Ai Souma. And don't forget the Ai. My parents are Kukai Souma, world known soccer/football player, and Utau Hoshina/Tsukiyomi/Souma... don't ask. You did? Okay, so as said before my dad is an internationally famous soccer player, and my mother is a former popstar. She still gets income from old supporties, but Dad is the main income of the family. However my family is still very wealthy thus my closet and many other things.

Yeah, life is pretty great. I pick out the Seiyo Elementary uniform, but of course, ajusted to my personal needs. One thing you should know about me. I upcycle the majority of my clothes, it's my thing. I changed up the buttons, from clear to gold and bronze with rinestones. Then I sewed a mp3/iPod (I don't own) pocket in the inside of the jacket. Trust me, I can't live with out music. Usually, I'll listen to Mom's old hits like Black Diamond, despite her protests. For my skirt has lace on the trimming and my boots have sewn on chains. Yup, totaly badass right? But actually I like vintage American clothing. Sad, though, I'm Utau Hoshina's daughter... I have a reputation to keep up.

"Yo! Pick-up Pick-up Pick-up! It's your bestfriend and cousin Rumi so you had better pick up!" Oh look, it's my overly peppy cousin: Yorumi Tsukiyomi, but I call her Rumi... So does everyone else. She is my bestfriend, seeing as we've been on tour with my mom since the beginning of our LIVES.

I press a button and my white phone comes to life. "Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?! Seriously Rumi, I'm not even fully awake yet! LEAVE. ME. ALONE."

"Well." Rumi says and I can imagine her sricking her tongue out at the phone. "Today's our first day of school, EVER. Soooooooo we have to follow up on our pact, meaning YOU CAN'T DITCH ME!" Then she makes her voice like my little sister's voice. "So... wat sould we wear Keiko?"

I roll my eyes. "Uniform, duh. Good bye Rumi."

"Psh fine. Bye."


So that was the first bit of the first chapter. PM me if you have any ideas.. or if you want to write your OC's POV. So that's all!

love is for

infinity

-fairest