Till Tomorrow

By:Novicewriter

I wrote this poem the other day, and realized that it matched pretty well with in the MOVIE (which was way to inaccurate for my taste) Saphira was dying, and Eragon was telling her to please live, and all that jazz, and I couldn't resist from putting it up.

Please stay awake till tomorrow

don't leave me here all alone

Please stay with me till tomorrow

don't leave me here to cry in the dark

I love you more than anyone else

forever and ever I'll never leave your side

to sit here together in bliss

just one more time

I just need one more day to show you

one last chance to tell you how I feel

to stand with you on the hillside

with the sun behind us

just one more time

I just don't want to be alone

I am only a man and can die of a broken heart

so please, I beg, don't leave me

let me hold you

just one more time

to say that I love you

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