Kidnapped?
Summary: Miley and Lilly are walking home from the movies when a car starts to follow them. They start getting nervous and try to lose him, but it doesn't work. What will happen when the two guys take Miley captive and beat Lilly so that she doesn't try to stop things? And what happens when they take their phones and smash them? Kidnapping happens.
Chapter 1
"Yeah the movie just ended. Lilly and I just walked out of the building; we're on our way home now. Okay dad, see you soon." Miley shut her phone. "So did you like the movie Lil?"
"Yeah it was really good. I actually didn't think I would like it."
"Lilly, you like any movie that has Orlando Bloom."
Lilly laughed. "Okay, that's true." They were on their way home, only a couple blocks away now. Lilly turned around. "Do you see that?"
Miley turned around too. "See what?"
"That car. It's following us…"
"No it's not." Miley said, but she knew it was true.
"Then why the hell is it going so slow?"
"Maybe the person is lost?" Miley suggested.
"I doubt it. Come on let's turn here." They quickly took a turn onto Highland Road, a pretty busy road on weekends. The car wasn't in sight, but they started to run just in case. "Okay I think we lost him." Lilly stated, out of breath.
"I hope so. Do you want me to take out my cell just incase?"
"Yeah maybe you should call your dad?"
"Okay." Miley dialed his number while they kept walking. Lilly was constantly looking around for the navy blue station wagon. "He didn't pick up. Let me try the house phone." She dialed her home number, but there wasn't an answer either.
"Well?"
"Let's just get home quick okay." It was about 4:30pm, it was still light out, but it was a gloomy day, so it started getting darker and darker as they walked down the street.
"I haven't seen any cars." Lilly said, nervously.
"Is that good or bad?" Miley asked.
"I'm not sure." Just then, the station wagon came out of nowhere and pulled up right in front of them. The two girls started to run. They heard the car start and drive after them. It stopped right in front of them and the man in the passenger seat got out of the car and grabbed Miley.
"Get off of me!" She screamed. She reached for her phone, but the man took it out of her hand and throw it against the sidewalk and it smashed into pieces. The man driving was already out of the car and got a hold of Lilly. He started to beat her while the other guy threw Miley into the car.
"Nice knowing you, Hannah Montana" He said in a snotty voice. "You'll be dead soon and all of your fans will cry over your death. It will be really satisfying." He said with a laugh. Before Miley got a chance to say anything, the man put duct tape over her mouth and shut the car door. He hopped into the driver's seat and started the car. "Come on, we don't need her!" He said to the man kicking Lilly. She was crying on the ground in pain. The man stopped beating her and got into the car, and they drove off.
Lilly's face, arms, and legs were bleeding. "Don't worry Miley, we'll find you." She said to herself, but she held her stomach in pain. She slowly grabbed her cell phone and started to dial, blood getting all over her phone.
So do you guys like it? If I get enough good reviews I'll keep going. I'm kinda into this tragedy type of writing, I like drama. But if I'm not good at it, and if you guys dont like this style or if u dont like the story at all, then I'll probably end it. But...constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, especially since im new to this style of writing.
review!!