This is my first story. Constructive criticism is tolerated.
Magolor's POV
I have been friends with Kirby for so long. Today, he was going to show me some of his other friends from Dreamland. I piloted the Lor Starcutter to his dimension. I was so excited! Kirby said that they are his closest friends, next to me of course. He told me that there was a village near his house called "Cappytown". I should meet him there. I looked at the Lor's screen displaying the arrival time: 2 hours.
No one's POV
It was a beautiful day in Dreamland. Kirby was in his house making breakfast for himself when suddenly he noticed some frinds at his door. It was Tiff, Tuff, Lololo and Lalala. "Poyo", said Kirby as he jumped for joy. He opened the door and let his friends inside.
"Hi Kirby!," said Tiff," How are you?
"Poyo", said Kirby as he showed his friends a picture of himself and Magolor playing together.
"Kirby, Who is that?" said Tuff as he pointed at the friend next to Kirby in the picture.
"Magolor," Kirby said in a cute baby voice