A/N: This is my first fanfic which I publish and the first which I have written in English. I only hope some mercy on my … mistakes and some review. Thank you!

Disclaimer: I do not own any of DC or MK characters, only my OCs.

REWRITING STARTED!

Barako Nisshoku, Ketsui Seihôkei and Mizuki Nohara walked back home. They just had had a wonderful day in Tropical Land.

"But I still don't understand WHY we went there." Ketsui yawned. She had a short, light-brown hair, grey eyes and glasses.

"Oh, c'mon! Don't be boring." Barako chirped. She was half-American and proud of it. Her long, straight and blond hair waved in the wind.

"But YOU were the one who wanted to go there but YOU didn't even come to the rollercoaster or the ghosttrain." Ketsui said. Barako was going to say something but Mizuki stopped her. She sensed the storm was coming.

"Girls, calm down. After all, we still had a lot of fun, didn't we?" The dark-haired girl said.

"Well, yeah." Ketsui finally admitted.

"Nani? Is it that much already?" Barako noticed when she watched her watch,"Sorry girls, I have to go. See ya tomorrow!" She started to run.

"See ya!"

"Bye!"

When Barako had disappeared Ketsui asked:"Do you also have a bad feeling about this?"

"We will see it later." Mizuki smiled,"Besides, we shouldn't worry about her. We three are already seventeen."

"You are propably right." Ketsui sighed.

Barako had no idea why she left in such a hurry. She didn't have any hobbies at this time of a day and no one was at home right now. Her father, Risei Nisshoku, was at work. He was a police. Barako's mother, Ren, was a teacher and was visiting her parents in Kyoto. And her so lovable little brother Iwa (13) was at his friend Kitte's place.

The blond decided to take a short cut trought the Haido –park. Suddenly, she heard a loud sound. It sounded like a gun shot. She froze. Someone or some people were shooting. She should run away and quick, but her legs didn't obey. It didn't make sense.

"Little girls shouldn't be in a place like this." A cold voice said behind her. Barako turned around. A man with cold, green eyes and long, silvery hair stood there and stared at her.

"Who- who are you?" Barako asked.

"None of your business." He said as someone grabbed her behind and tried to strangle Barako. Just before she lost her consciouness, she saw an evil grin.

A/N: So, here was the first chap. I hope you liked it. Please review!

Japan-English wordbook:

nani = what