Well hey guys (: okay so I had more but I decided to go back and fix chapter one because I wasn't happy with it, and because of a comment I got. So I hope I got this right.
AND , there's some Steve whump coming (: Thank you for sticking with it (:
Ps. 'Olelo pa'a means promise. i looked it up, if that doesnt directly translate my bad :)
Hawaii five-0 doesn't belong to me, but like any writer here, we wish it did.
(idk why the summary wont change so there it is below)
summary: There's a new member of five-0, but on their first undercover mission as a new team things dont go as planned. How is the team going to cope shorted one man? How much has the new rookie learned and will she be able to keep her promise? ratedT for language
"Steve!"
The voice that came from the abandoned warehouse was full of fear and urgency, and at this very moment he knew why chin got so nervous sending Kono into high risk situations undercover. The scene became more horrific, all the while the guard watching the undercover cop began to pull harder at the woman's cloths and there was another yell. The woman inside had blown the cover, but anyone in their right mind would given the circumstances.
"Danny, I'm going in."
"Steve, this is not what we planned. Do you want to get her killed?"
Steve let out a deep breath he wasn't aware he was holding. This case had gone on long enough. The team had been chasing this guy for well over a month now.
Marcus Lizeth is a drug trafficker for the most powerful man in Steve's minds eye. Wo Fat. Getting Lizeth would get the five-0 team that much closer to getting their main man. Much like catching Victor Hesse did.
"I can't watch this any more, and if she tries to run she's good as dead anyway I have to do something."
"We're with you bruh," Chin stated as he and Kono strapped their bullet proofs on. As they exited the surveillance van Steve couldn't help but examine the situation. 'Nikki went in and was just fine. Lizeth put his men on her like she was armed even though she wasn't.' He shook his head and clenched his jaw. 'That didn't seem right and he should have gone in at that point, but she said she could handle anything and he believed her. She used to be military police, and was deployed in desert storm. There was no reason to treat her any way but like she could handle things. So he let things go further and a guard is now trying to get 'some' while Lizeth goes to get the three bodies who are packing drugs.' he knew he could see it on Nikki's face. The temptation to run. She would need some counseling after this. They all could benefit from it.
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Tears streamed down her face. This was supposed to be a simple drug bust, no one said anything about bodies and cutting and blood. The thought made her sick. She watched as the first body bag was opened. The woman looked no older than 27. That was too close in age. The next body bag was significantly smaller and when opened reviled a young boy. The guard started to pull her off to a corner of the warehouse. Nikki complied remembering the important thing that Lizeth had told her. 'If you're resistant you'll die. I know something of importance and we'll both get away if your obedient.' these words sent chills down her spine as one of the guards began to pull at her clothes. Her body started to shake and she screamed the only thing that came to mind. Steve. Lizeth looked up from his work over the bodies oblivious to the fact that Nikki had given them away. The intestines of the female corpse were large and inflated with the product. Cocaine.
Nikki let out another scream this time partly muffled by the guards hand over her mouth. He touched her chest and pulled at her clothes. Nikki silently prayed for her newfound team to end this soon.
There was a shuffling; only a trained ear could pick up, on the other side of the warehouse. Nikki caught the man's eye and he winked at her. Not a friendly wink, but the kind to give a sign. The wink was keep acting; a head nod would mean 'show time'. She did as she was told but never took her eyes off of her partner in the shadows.
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Steve hid behind a stack of crates his partner not far behind. Danny let out a deep breath. What were they waiting for? Danny tapped Steve on the shoulder and gave him the go ahead. Steve nodded and there suddenly was action on the other side of the warehouse. Steve and Danny left their safe place to assist in finally catching these guys. Guns were pointed and shots were fired. Lizeth took off toward the exit and Steve's natural instinct was to follow. Danny went through and zip tied all the suspects, after a considerable amount of beating, and guided them all to squad cars at the front of the empty building. Chin and Kono both met up with Danny and Nikki holding onto their own cuffed men and shoved them into separate squad cars.
Nikki bent over and put her hands on her knees.
"Hey guys, hate to break up the bust party, but where is McGarrett?" she asked partly out of breath. The team members looked at each other and rushed back into the building.
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Danny hadn't even realized Steve was gone, which is surprising because he's hard to miss. But again, like most other cases, Steve's 6'1", tall, tan, and handsome figure was nowhere to be found. They were led out the back of the warehouse by the pile of boxes that had been knocked over.
The apparent trail of foot prints led the three well trained detectives and the new rookie into towering stacks of shipping containers.
There were a few gunshots and the hearts of the team beat faster than before, as they split up following the sounds of those shots and footsteps.
The next moments were like trying to finish an intense maze in the newspaper. The more dead ends you came up on, the more frustrated you became. For Danny this was terrifying. He had gone through seeing McGarrett get shot, and him get abducted. But the worst case scenario ran through his head as he turned another corner, to be disappointed yet again with the lack of McGarrett's well body there waiting for him. There was another shot and Danny stopped in his tracks. There were no footsteps near by so he took off running totally oblivious to his surroundings.
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Steve looked straight ahead at the body he shot down. Adrenaline pumped through his body. Part from fright and part from anger. He let his head rest against the shipping container where he fell, and made a self evaluation.
Steve checked his bullet proof. He knew he had been shot at but he didn't know the degree of damage. Bullet proof vests are to protect the human body's vital organs from serious injury from shrapnel and bullets... to a degree. This one particular bullet was bigger, for a lack of better terms. A shotgun to narrow it down. The shell casing was a few yards away and Steve was too dizzy from blood loss to recall the exact caliber. The only thing Steve's mind could do was think this.
That Son of a b**** shot me.
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Danny caught sight of the fallen criminal just feet away. The adrenaline pumped through his system faster than his own blood. When Danny finally reached his partner he expected to see him marveling at the kill shot he put on his opponent, but instead he found him bleeding around his heavy Kevlar vest. Steve looked up in the direction of his partner, his dark hazel eyes pierced Danny the moment he was in Steve's line of vision. Danny dropped to his knees and hands shaking went to pull off the vest to evaluate.
"Hey Steve, how you doing there buddy?" Danny asked. Steve's eyes were glazed over and the words that he spoke were slurred while the sentences were incomplete. He clearly comprehended what was being said to him but couldn't relay the answer that had been constructed in his mind. The only thing that truly conveyed the message Steve wanted, Danny believed, was the aneurism face mixed with shock he gave when he heard Nikki and the cousins approaching. The face would terrify anyone in the medical field, but Danny got the message
I'll be alright. Let them know that.
With the sight of Steve, Nikki began to shake again as she slowly dropped to her knees on the other side of him.
"What happened?" she asked her voice full of worry. She ignored the noise that was slowly becoming a quiet hum above them. Kono was calling an ambulance, Chin the Governor and Danny paced back and forth on the phone with HPD. Steve gave a lopsided grin. He tried to cover up the obvious, that he was in pain and for a moment things were okay as they could be. The paramedics came and started to take Steve away on a stretcher. But things went down hill when one of the EMT's started shouting out orders.
"put him on the ground! He's seizing!"
The five-0 team stood in horror not able to do anything but watch their partner, friend, and boss convulse on the dusty cement.
Okay, tell me what you think (: maybe give me ideas for what's to come next (;