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Emily had just got to London. She looked around and saw that it was nothing like New York. There were no sky scrappers anywhere. But it was just as crowded. Emily took out the piece of paper that had Agent B's address. Emily asked some people for where it was and she found out that she had to walk to the other side of London. And she couldn't take a taxi considering that she didn't bring any money with her.
As Emily started walking, she noticed that a girl was following her. She had puffy dirty blonde hair who looked like she could be around 15. Emily looked at the girl and immediately that the girl was not with the CRU. She had practicing to read facial expressions so that she could tell CRU agents from ordinary people. Emily took a bunch of turns to throw the girl off, but she found Emily every single time.
She must have been attracted to Emily because Emily was the Flame Of Olympus. But that would have meant that the girl wasn't human. She had to ditch her before some more people started to notice what was happening (if not already). And she didn't want the CRU to find her. AGAIN!
But wherever she went, she managed to find Emily. Emily started getting frustrated and felt the flame rising in her. But Riza stopped her. Stay calm Emily. We should not have came here. She is a descendant of a race of creatures that lost their world long before you were born. And there must be more of them in this world.
Then why is she on Earth? Emily thought.
I do not know why she is on Earth, my people had thought that they were all wiped out, but I guess we are wrong. Which is unexpected because we have never been wrong before.
But that doesn't explain why they are following me. The Olympians might be draw to me, but not like this! Emily replied.
I do not know the answer to that either child, but the effects of your presence is starting to weaken on her. Soon, she will be in complete control if not already.
Emily realized that she needed to get out of there. But she was to late, she had already regained control. She had puffy dirty blonde hair who looked like she could be around 15. And before I could do anything the girl took out a stick and shouted some random words that Emily had never heard before. Faster then her eyes could follow, a bright green light came out of the stick and struck her square in the chest. But Emily didn't feel a thing.
By looking at the girl's face, it was very obvious that she was very shocked. "How are you still alive?" she asked in a very deep British accent.