Okay so this is my first story written on fan fiction . . . This is a story that I already wrote but I'm gonna add some things to it. It is on fan pop but I think I'm going to be deleting that. I'm all new to this so if there is anything I should know PLEASE tell me,. Thank u,!

This story will be written in Neji's and Tenten's P.O.V

WARNING: This story is rated M for a reason, if you feel uncomfortable with anything dealing with the M rating please, DON'T READ, !

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, ! ! !

Chapter 1: Transformation

I was just about to go meet Neji so we could train today but I ran into one of my best friends, Ino. She could really be a pain in the ass sometimes. She currently had me sitting on my bed as she wreaked havoc on my eyebrows.

"Look, we can't waste time. I have to train so I can be the best! And in order to be the best I have to defeat the great Neji Hyuga," I ranted off to Ino.

"Quit your yapping and hold still," Ino said as she plucked my eyebrows.

"You do this every time, Ino. I don't have to look good just to go train! I'll get sweaty and messy anyway."

"Hold still," she demanded as she plucked away.

"Ow!" I yelped.

"Got it. All done." She smiled, then proceeded to do my hair.

"I thought you said you were done!"

"I can't let you go out in two panda buns." She undid my buns and brushed it into a perfect tight ponytail.

"Thanks, Ino," I hissed, jumping up and snatching my weapon bag.

I couldn't stand it when I ran into Ino right before I was scheduled to go train with Neji. She always had to try and give me a makeover as if I wasn't going to be a sweaty, musky heap when I was done training. Neji and I always trained together if Lee was sick, busy, or being youthful. It's sad for me to say that I have NEVER beaten Neji in a fight, yet. It's so disappointing. Sometimes I think being a girl is the cause of that, but then I think about the Hokage. Lady Tsunade is so strong and she is the first female Hokage. If she can do it then I know I'll become stronger if I work hard enough.

I waited patiently for Tenten's arrival. Lee was currently out sick so I was stuck with Tenten to train with. I saw a girl walking towards me. She was kind of attractive, but as she got closer I realized that it was Tenten. Not that Tenten wasn't attractive, but she was just my teammate.

"Hey, Neji. Sorry I'm late! I ran into Ino when I was getting ready." She rolled her eyes and began to ramble on and on.

I think she failed to realize that I did not care about her and her girl time with Ino. I was well aware of the type of friends she had so she didn't need to remind me. I let her ramble on until I got tired of hearing it.

"…you know how that goes-" was the last thing I heard before I cut her off.

"I believe I do not. Now let's get this over with," I said emotionlessly, as I got into my fighting stanza.

Tenten bit her bottom lip. "Okay," she said, quickly getting into her fighting stance as well. 'Let's do this.'

6 hours later…

I was panting and out of breath as I looked at Neji, who was staring at me with his white eyes. He wasn't even out of breath. Is that boy made of steel and rock?

"Um...I'll see you tomorrow," was all I could say.

Neji scoffed. "Weakling," he said, walking away.

"Great practice!" I yelled lamely.

"Hn," was his reply.

"Shit!" I hung my head in shame.

I was no match for Neji. He was untouched. No scars…nothing. I felt tears build up in my eyes as I got angry. Why couldn't I even lay a scratch on him? This was ridiculous! I shook my head in anger then ran home.

"I'm pathetic! I didn't even put a scratch on him! How could he dodge all my weapons like that? I can't believe it. He called me a weakling, Sakura! A fucking weakling. He wasn't even out of breath or anything. I'm no match for him. I...I'm...weak!" I sobbed.

"That jerk!" Sakura said angrily, then smiled down at me. "Tennie, it's okay. Just work harder. That's all. Don't beat yourself up about it. One day I wanna be as strong and good as Tsunade. But in order to do that I have to train and practice. That's all you have to do too." She hugged me.

"Oh, Sakura. You always know what to say. You're the best friend ever."

Ino cleared her throat. "Hm. Uhm."

"Oh, yeah. You too, Ino!" I smiled and hugged her too.

"Okay now that that's over. What are we doing tonight?" Ino yelled, standing up on the bed.

"It's-"

"Friday!" we all yelled in unison, then laughed.

"Sasuke said something about Kiba having a party," Sakura suggested.

"...nah," we said after a while, shaking our heads in disagreement.

"Hey, how about we go shopping for some sexy outfits then to Sassy's to get our hair done, and Aliyah's to get our nails and feet done. Then to wrap it all up go out clubbing!" Ino yelled.

"Sounds good!" Sakura agreed. "Let's call Hinata!"

"Uh… I'm sorry guys, but I don't think I'm gonna go," I said in a low voice. They both dropped back to their seats.

"Why not?" Sakura yelled.

"Yeah, Ten, stop being a damn party pooper. Sheesh!" Ino rolled her eyes.

"I need to train and practice. Neji and I are suppose to be meeting tomorrow at the same time. I want to be at least a little better."

"That's what your meeting Neji for, to practice," Sakura said.

"Duh," Ino chimed in.

"Well...I guess I could go."

"Yay!" Sakura cheered.

"Now let's go. You know I'm gonna have to help you, Tennie," Ino said, looking at my closet. There were no girly clothes, just jeans and t-shirts. "You dress like a damn boy! Channel your inner girl sometimes!"

"Yeah." I rubbed my arm and chuckled.

"Ino, how many outfits are you gonna pick out for me?" I asked, looking at the pile of clothes in horror.

"Its only twelve, Tennie. Don't be such a whiner."

"Ino, its only one night! Do you have to go so overboard?"

Ino ignored me and threw another dress at me. I held it up and my eyes grew big. "Where the fuck is the dress, Ino!" I stared at it.

It was a pretty lavender dress that split right down the middle of my breast and stopped at my belly button. To top it off, it was short as ever.

"Just put the fucking dress on!" Sakura yelled.

"Okay! Don't be so snappy," I said, going back in the dressing room. I put the dress on and looked in the mirror. "Oh my." I felt naked but I looked...hot! I came out of the dressing room slowly. "What do you think?" I looked at Sakura, then Ino.

They just stared with their mouths open.

"Hello? Earth to Sakura and Ino!" I snapped.

"Girl. You look h-o-t. HOT!" Ino exclaimed.

I smiled. "I know. Isn't this color pretty?"

"Yes, it's gorgeous!" Sakura smiled.

Just then, Ino held up a pair of black six-inch platform pumps. I sweat dropped.

"Oh no," I moaned.

"Oh yes." Ino smiled and handed them to me. "Put them on, missy."

"There is no way! You have GOT to be kidding me!"

"Nope. I'm as serious as a heart attack, baby! Now chop-chop, we don't have all day."

"The clock is ticking Tennie!" Sakura said in a singsong voice.

"F. M. L," I mumbled.

I lay in my room after I finished meditating.

Knock. Knock. Knock.

"Who is it?" I asked as my eyes shot to the door.

"Um...it's me," came a soft and low voice.

I knew who it was and I sat up. "Come in."

Hinata came in and looked at me. "Uh. . . I'm going out...with Ino, Tenten, and...Sa-Sakura. Father says you have to come with me."

"I don't see why I have to accompany you. It's not me who wants to go out and waste my time fooling around with those immature teenagers you call your friends."

"But...Father said-"

I cut her off, "I don't care what my uncle says. I won't be going." She just stood there and stared at me. "Is there anything else, Hinata?"

"Uh… n-no." She left.

I lay back down and proceeded to get some sleep. I had to train in the morning. Tenten looked rather appealing today. I should have known she was planning to go out. I never saw her look so-

Knock. Knock. Knock.

I snapped my eyes open. "Who is it?"

"...me...again."

"What do you want, Hinata?" I sat up.

"Um… Father wants to see you. I told him that I wouldn't go but… but he insisted."

I should have known he was going to want to see me. I got up and proceeded downstairs to my uncle's study after slipping my blue shoes on. "You wished to see me, Uncle?" I asked.

"Yes. I want you to accompany Hinata tonight and make sure that she's alright."

"But uncle, I don't understand why I have to accompany her when it's not me who wants to go out. She's perfectly old enough to handle herself, and Ino, Sakura and Tenten will be with her."

"You're right. Ino, Sakura, Tenten and you will be with her. Is that understood?" He raised his voice.

"Yes, uncle." Showing no emotion, I bowed before leaving the room. "Come, Hinata." I knew she was hiding behind the banister.

"Um... Neji. I do not have...to go. Uh. If you don't want to come with me." She played with her fingers nervously.

I ignored her and left the house to wait for her at the front. Twenty minutes later, Hinata came out dressed in a black and white tutu dress. The top was black and the bottom was white. She had on a pair of black pumps with white accessories. Her hair had a white flower on the side and she was holding a white clutch purse.

She walked to where I was standing. "I'm… ready."

I looked at her attire in disapproval and started walking. "Where are we going?"

"To Tenten's house," she stated quietly, looking down.

Sakura, Ino and I were before the big ceiling-to-floor mirror in my room putting on makeup.

"Tennie, where did you get this mirror from?" Ino asked. " I need one!"

"It was a gift," I said, putting on lip gloss. I looked at them. "Why did both of you wear black and white?"

They looked at each other, then smiled. "I didn't even notice," they said in unison.

Ino had on a short black ruffled dress with white stilettos and white accessories. Her hair was down with slight curls. Sakura had on a short strapless black dress, white leggings, black five-inch boots and a white cardigan.

I smacked my lips together, then made sure my hair was okay.

I had on my lavender dress, the black six-inch platform pumps, a black cardigan, and accessories with silver jewelry. "Well, don't I look stunning." I posed and smiled. My makeup was flawless, thanks to Sakura.

Knock. Knock. Knock.

"That must be Hinata," I said, then went to open the door. "Hey, Hinata!" I smiled, hugging her.

She stared for a while. "Um... do... do I know you?"

I was shocked. "It's me, Tenten!" It was then that I noticed Neji behind her. Even his face looked shocked for a second. I smiled. "Hey, Neji." He said nothing as he looked away. How rude. He could at least say hi back. "Come on in! We're almost ready," I told Hinata.

"Tenten...you look...beautiful."

"Thanks, but...I feel like a hooker." I whispered the last part before going back upstairs.

Who...where...when did Tenten get that sexy? What is this funny feeling that I'm experiencing? My heart is beating so quickly. I think Hinata can hear it. I have to pull myself together. It's just Tenten!

I cleared my head, then entered the house behind Hinata. This night was going to be interesting.

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