Disclaimer: I, Emmeline, do not own Eragon OR Mary Sues/Gary Stus. I only own my theory about it all.

Mary Sue and Gary Stu: Version One (Good at Everything)

Theme-song: Get Over It/ Why by Avril Lavigne (Mainly because i'm listening to them...)

Written by: Du.Sundavar.Brisingr.

In a kingdom far away, in the land of Alagaësia, a beautiful queen and a handsome king had an adorable baby girl.

Mary, they called her. Mary Sue.

As she grew older, she grew even more stunning. Her golden hair glistened in the sunlight, her pale, smooth, unblemished skin contrasted against her purple-blue eyes, and her thin but curvy body was watched eagerly by boys and men alike, waiting for their opportunity. She was a bright student, wisdom came easily to her and she always did as she was told with a bright, flawless smile on her face. She knew the ways of the sword and magic like she knew the back of her hand. Everyday brought her new adventures and troubles, all of which she managed to slip out of with ease.

One beautiful sunny day, she sparred in the woods with her childhood friend, Gary Stu. His dark, straight hair whipped around his ears as he drew his sword forward, his brown eyes set in concentration. Tanned muscles rippled along his arms as he blocked a hit by Mary. They were perfectly matched, in battle and in love.

"Good block!" Gary cried, as Mary whipped her sword in front of her chest just in time. "Thank you, Gary." She blushed. Recently she had been developing feelings for him, since he had returned from war, fighting for the blue Rider.

Little did she know, he held the same feelings within him. How i wish she loved me merely half as much as i love her. His concentration slipped, and he fell on top of her thin form. "Oh!" She gasped, her breath taken away just as much by his body against hers as her chest being crushed. "Sorry." Gary whispered, but did not move. She peered shyly up at him as he hesitantly picked himself up. "Mary...i..." She stood up and put a long, thin finger against his lips. "Don't say anything." His eyes darted from her eyes, to her finger against his mouth. "Gary, i love you." He watched her perfect, wild-rose pink lips form the words he'd been waiting to hear for as long as he could remember. "Mary...i love you too." He pulled her into a passionate kiss as the rain started falling.

Things needed for a MS/GS story:

1. Perfection-beautiful bright day, beautiful bright characters, beautiful bright love blossoming.

2. Love-Two perfect people. CANNOT be one perfect, one normal or niether or opposite.

3. Change-Sudden change in weather, for example

Hopefully this story is informative as well as helpful, to show yall what NOT to write about. The next chapter will be about the other type of Mary Sues and Gary Stus: Damsel In Distress/Rescuer.

Until then, make love not war!!

Emmeline