Note: This is my first try at first-person please R and R
Chapter one
The sound of screams woke me up at night, I knew it was time to run.
Fleeing through the forest no turning back, the branches cut at my arms; bramble catching my feet. I don't stop, they will find me. The cold harsh wind lashed at my face as I run. I have no destination my instincts tell me to run and hide.
I am Nadia, daughter of Garael, seventh descendant of Malek the notorious Sarafan warrior.
It was known that Lord Kain ordered Malek's descendants to die, he has set his sons to kill us. I believe I am the only one to escape their clutches; my family slaughtered in cold blood. I was the last to escape my home. I need Sanctuary.
Still running tears drip down my face; I want to stop and fight but it would be foolish of me. The undergrowth grows thicker as I venture further into the forest. My heart aches, 'how could anyone cause so much pain and suffering?' I thought clutching to my chest as my lungs weakened. The heavens opened and rain poured down heavily washing dirt off my skin. I fall deep in my thoughts. My mother, my father, my brothers and sisters will be gone. I am still here, I will meet my family's killers and revenge will be sweet.
Note: sorry it's a bit short, please R and R to tell me what you think. Edited on 13th September 2013