Hello everyone!
So this is my story "The Creation of Us" and I am really excited about it. Some of you may know that this story or a few chapter has been posted before, however I have decided to rewrite several parts to make the story flow better and produce a product that I think that you will enjoy more than the original. But I did not really post many chapters before so right now seemed like the best time to rewrite it. This only the prologue so I am sorry for it being so short! :)
Disclaimer: (This will be the only one I post for this story) C.S. Lewis is the creator of Narnia and all of its creatures. My characters are my own.
So I hope you enjoy!
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Peter's POV
I could hear everyone downstairs as I was in bed staring at the ceiling. The moon was high up in the sky, lighting my room as everyone in Narina was preparing for tomorrow's celebration in honor of my siblings and I. Tomorrow night, many of Narnia's citizens would be at Cair Paravel for the celebration. The Celebration itself lasted an enter week, with different competitions in honor of each of my siblings and I; archery for Susan, dagger throwing for Lucy, jousting for Ed and one on one sword fighting in honor of me. One activity however was always everyone's favorite. Mr. Tumnus would sit down, pull out his pipe and tell all the creatures tales of the epic battle.
I remembered the past years, every reaction the same. Old members of court would put their one or two words in, interrupting the story to talk about killing a dwarf or wolf, while the new children would gasp or squeal at certain parts.
A soft knock came from my door causing me to come out of my dreaming state. I sat up reaching for the glass of water on my nightstand. "Come in." I said taking a sip of the half full glass. The door slowly opened and I saw her walk in. I smiled, as she quickly came and jumped into bed beside me.
The Next Night
The grand hall was full of Narnian's celebrating the fifteenth anniversary of Jadis' defeat. From my throne I saw everyone dancing and just being joyful. Small children chased after Mr. Tumnus begging for his annual story. When he finally sat down and pulled out his pipe the crowd got silent small breeze came in and all the candles seemed to dim. I reached for my goblet and finished off what was left of my drink as I watched everyone.
"It had been five years since the Pevensie children had taken the thrones here at Cair Paravel, when they first learned the legends of the four." Tumnus started, "The four were magical beings from different lands, brought to Narnia by Aslan himself. They each were given a job to do. To take care of the elements that created Narnia to the best of their ability. Aiden, the oldest of the four was in charge of the fire of Narnia. Vane was the keeper of the winds, Gina was to control the earth, and finally Katherine controlled the water. They each spent time being advisors to the ruling families before Jadis took over, turning each to stone, until they were brought back…"
"Wait! What story is this?" A small child squealed. I saw the faces of many creatures giving one another questioning looks.
"You mean you've never heard this story before?" Mr. Tumnus asked looking around. People and creatures nodded their heads in response. Mr. Tumnus looked towards me. His smile meeting my own. "Well good." He said. "This time we won't have any interruptions with this one."