DBZ. The Line of Bardock
Author Notes:
In this timeline Goku has an older brother who goes by the name of Talon. So this is going to follow some of the cannon but definitely not all of it. It's FanFiction so I'm defiantly going to make it my own. I'm very new to writing so I apologize if I missed any spelling or grammar and keep in mind I'm doing this all on my iPhone in the notes section. What's important to me is that I spin an interesting story that leaves you churning for more.
Please review and I hope you enjoy :)
Chapter 1.
The Beginning
-Planet Vegeta-
Talon approached the reception desk at recuperation chamber seven.
"Is my father still in recuperation?"
The receptionist looked up from his screen with astonishment.
"Ahh Talon you're Bardock's son correct?"
"Yea I'll claim that suicidal bastard." He grinned
The receptionist smiled. "Your father must be proud! Every sayian has heard the rumor of your promotion! So just between us is the rumor true?"
Talon scowled at him and walked past the receptionist to the door. "Sorry but that information is classified. If you don't mind and open the door I'm in a hurry."
The receptionist scowled and did as he was told.
Talon walked down the hallway seeing the newborns on his right.
Huh I wonder if Kakarot is in this bay. Ahh there he is, well he is the spitting image of our father that's for sure, poor kid that's a mug only our mother could love. He's only an average power level though. Well he's my brother I'll be damned if this family is cursed with another Raditz. After his first deployment maybe I'll request him for my squad as long as he will take instruction I'll make a fighter of him yet. Almost on que Kakarot smiled in his chamber. Where is he headed anyway apparently.. Planet 4032-877. That's in the north galaxy.
Bardock burst through the door and headed in his direction.
"What's the rush?"
Bardock stopped as he approached his son.
"Talon, What are you doing back on planet Vegeta?"
"Well first I came to see my new born brother before he got shipped off to his first assignment. "Then I heard how my suicidal father went to Kanassa and almost killed himself. Lucky for me, you and Kakarot happen to be in the same place."
Bardock looked at the pods and crossed his arms.
"Only an average power level. That's disappointing. Is there something you wanted to ask me Talon? I need to catch up to Tora and the rest of my team before those bastards claim all the glory without me."
Talon couldn't believe his father not even two days old and his father already has written Kakarot off just like him and Raditz. I can understand why Raditz would be disappointing. I tried training the little bastard myself some when we both came home for R&R to see mom. The little shit doesn't listen, he is unteachable that's why he's still doing minor assignments. If anything slightly challenges him he gives up on himself. Regardless of how much potential he has. That's what truly is disappointing.
"Actually never mind father... I don't want to get between you and your glory you better go catch up with Tora."
Bardock slapped is son on the shoulder and started to head off.
"Don't get killed kid."
Then he was gone.
Talion leaned against the hallway wall just looking at his little brother.
Why am I not surprised. He doesn't even know that I'm supposed to lead Havoc
Squad for Lord Cooler. To think I was going to ask that dick to serve with me. Whatever fuck him he wouldn't risk his pride to serve underneath his son anyway.
Talon approached the glass separating him from his baby brother.
"Don't worry Kakarot I'll save a spot for you in Havoc Squad."
He smiled and walked towards the exit and out the front door charged up and blasted off towards home.
Mom's probably at home now she always hated hospitals. I remember right after Raditz was sent off she practically destroy the place. She always was more emotional than the average sayian. Most sayian woman didn't even fuss when their babies are taken straight from there womb to get registered for deployment. I'll ask her to take Bardock's place in my squad, better mine then his they never could operate well together after they had me. He claimed that after they had a child she got too attached and emotional when he refused to mate with her. Two kids later and still he refused to show anything more the physical interest in his mother. Fucking prick.
Talon approached his apartment and landed on the balcony.
*glass smashing*
Talon slowly opened the door to his house ready to dodge any projectiles headed his way.
"That stupid, selfish, inconsiderate son of a bitch!"
Talon stepped towards the left as a plate smashed and shattered against the wall.
Gine noticed her son as he walked in but that didn't stop her fury.
"Talon?! You better never treat a woman like your father treats me, or I swear I'll kill you then follow you to hell and kick your ass some more!"
Talon smiled at his mom. If anything she was always entertaining when they saw each other.
"Ugh!" She said as she gave up her rant and crossed her arms and sat on the floor."
Talon looked at his mother and grinned at her.
"You know we have furniture right."
Gine looked at her son and blew up the nearest chair with a ki blast.
"That's what I think of your damn furniture!"
Talon approached his mom and crouched down in front of her.
"I know what you need."
Gine looked up at her son with some wrath still in her eyes.
"What did you kill your dad for me? Because if you have brought his body your officially my favorite."
Talion shook his head and smiled at his mother.
"Lord Cooler has requested that I form a team for him to compete with Lord Frieza's Ginyu Force.
I want you to be my 2nd."
Gine hugged her son with pride in her heart and replied.
"I knew you have been extremely successful in all your missions lately but this is wonderful!"
She hesitated for a second.
"Your father isn't operating with you is he?"
Talon was about to reply when his mother cut him off.
"Who am I kidding your father has too much pride and ambition to ever serve under his son. Well who needs him. You and I
will bring the galaxy to its knees without your asshole of a father's help. Besides if my scouter isn't malfunctioning your way more powerful then your father is by the looks of it! A thing I'm sure he refuses to accept."
Talon helped her up off the ground.
"I was actually thinking about extending an offer to Raditz too once he returns from his last assignment he's got potential if he would only take direction. Kakarot also, I'll start training him young once he cleanses his first planet. He will be eager to prove his worth."
Gine smiled at the thought of her family conquering the galaxy together. But her attention was grabbed when she saw the commotion outside.
Talon noticed his mother's look and turned around and walked out the balcony door with Gine close at his heel. The both looked up with horror as they saw the massive amount of sayian warriors in the sky and farther off was Lord Frieza's ship. Talion grabbed his mother's hand and slowly floated into the sky.
"I don't like the look of this.."
Then there it was a huge red sphere of energy grew larger and larger in front of his eyes.
"We need to leave now!"
Just like that Talon with his mother in hand zoomed off at high speed towards the nearest hanger...
The hysterical laugh of the evil Emperor Frieza was the last thing Bardock would hear as his body was consumed by the giant red energy sphere. Despite the excruciating pain of the very flesh being seared from his bones he lost himself in that moment...
Bardock watched his son Kakarot's life flash before his eyes. He would one day get vengeance for all Sayians and best Frieza. He would even become a god and challenge Lord Beerus and hold his own with God Of Destruction himself. Great pride filled Bardok's heart, but sadness did as well. His son, who would be known as Goku, Would never know him or his mother or brother on the planet below. As he closed his eyes and came back to his reality, accepting his fate. The father's last wish for his son was that his mother and brother below on planet Vegeta would somehow escape.
Panic ensued on the surface of planet Vegeta, as the planet was consumed by the approaching doom that was Emperor Frieza's wrath. Talon and his mother Gine had just reached the hanger where the escape pods were located. Only to discover the carnage that ensued. Comrades turned on each other. Killing each other over whatever pods remained. Talon was determined to get his mother and himself off the planet. He scanned the hanger for two available pods. Talon with his mother in hand dashes as fast as he can past his sayian kin who are fighting each other for the slightest chance of survival. He reaches the pods unscathed by ki blasts that his sayian kin are recklessly throwing past one another. As he approaches the pods he deflects a ki blast that was headed in their direction.
"Idiots! They'll destroy the pods on accident before anyone can clear the blast!"
Gine opens the pod cockpits and and jumps inside.
"You know the coordinates! We are following Kakarot to his destination I'll keep in contact via scouter!"
Talon stands guard and responds to his mother.
"I'll cover you go!"
As the pod closed and zoomed off into space. Talon deflects an energy blast that would have intercepted his mother's course with one of his own. Once it left the atmosphere he jumped into his own and set the coordinates and took off hoping that a random ki blast wouldn't cut his escape off.
"Talon! Talon! Come in! Did you clear the atmosphere?!"
"Mom I'm fine I'm clear. I just passed through it."
His ship began to rock rapidly as he watched the blast impact planet Vegeta's surface. His home slowly began to break apart as he fled the explosion. His ships visor blared red so intensely that he had to block his eyes from glare. His home was destroyed. His entire species in a blink of second had been reduced to a handful.
"Son?! Are you still there are you alright?!"
"Yea... I'm fine I just need a second is all.."
"Talon I don't think your father made it..."
He could hear distress in her voice.
"We will survive this mom we will follow Kakarot. We will lay low and grow stronger we will even contact Raditz when it's safer."
"Talon listen to me. You have to protect what's left of our family. If something happens to me and I don't make it.. "
He heard a sharp clawing sound in the background.
SYSTEM MALFUNCTION. SYSTEM MALFUNCTION.
HULL BREACH.
HULL BREACH.
Talin's ship started to beep.
COMMENCING HYPERBAULIC SLEEP IN 30 SECONDS
"DAMN IT NO! Mom you'll be fine! You can't die!"
"Take care of your brothers at all costs family is the only thing that matters.. You have to be strong okay.. Son... I lo..."
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"NOOOOO!
COMMENCING HYPERBAULIC SLEEP"
Talon fought the grogginess that eventually overtook him and eventually blacked out.