Twenty eight

This is a little poem type thing I wrote of the top of my head, it's a poem about the twenty eight stars, it's about their destinies. Please review and let me know what you think – anything will be great thanks!

I do not own Fushigi Yugi; this is just a bit of fun!

I look up at the night sky

There I can see all twenty eight constellations

All giving their own little light to their world

Through sacrifice, loss and pain

They have saved their world

They have protected their priestess

They have proved their worth

They have fulfilled their destinies

They have done all what was asked of them

Yet, all through this, though they had each other's company

They were still so alone

Twenty eight people out of such a large population

So many have had to lose their lives

To them, it's alright

It was for a good cause after all

Yet, it seems that on a larger scale…

On the scale which may matter most

Does it really mean anything whether they live or die?

To the one's with the power

They and the priestess may be nothing more than experiments

Than a game

Like individual chess pieces

Their movements controlled by fate

By the one's they follow

A beautiful bond which can never be broken

Like lone brothers and sisters

Fighting to save what they may not fully understand

END

Like I said this was off the top of my head and what may be the case with the destiny which was bestowed upon them all, I hope you enjoyed – please tell me honestly what you thought thanks!

Western Dreamer39