Annoyance Of The Super Fangirl-Sues

A/N: Truthfully, I always wanted to do this. I've been seeing these annoying FaCC Mary-Sues frequently and it's annoying the heck outta me, so I wanted to try and make my own Mary-Sue for the fun of it. First, just to let you know I am an atheist of Mary-Sues….- can't stand them . but I find it funny to read stories about them and how the Canon characters quickly fall in love at first sight or something like that :P

Decided to make my own of what I see of most OC's in the Fanboy and Chum Chum franchise. Anyway… this story will be short, and I hope you enjoy… if ever. I am going to make this character incredibly Sueish to show how much character crap I see.

Chapter One: The New Girl In Class

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''Today students, we have a new student… so be nice.'' Mr. Mufflin said, monotonous as always. The class was still chattering, not caring about anything but themselves, except two particular students; who were excited about the new student. ''I wonder whose the new kid!'' Fanboy exclaimed as he looked at Chum Chum….

''Yeah! Me too! He or she could be like some secret super hero!'' Chum Chum replied, drawing on the back of his paper sheet as Fanboy squealed, jumping up and down in his seat. ''That would be ten times better!'' and pulled out a clear sheet of paper to create a greeting card.

''Would you ninnies be quiet! You both are annoying the devil outta me!'' Kyle snapped, irritated as the two superhero fans giggled, ''oh Kyle… you're just hiding the fact you too are excited to see the new kid!'' Fanboy laughed while Kyle groaned in agony.

''Okay, silence now! Let's be respectful…'' The teacher said and the door opened…

A girl stepped inside the classroom, and everyone was quiet. She appeared no older than twelve, her long wavy auburn locks at the end of her elbows and a purple streak on her bangs. The girl was wearing a golden, glittery big shirt; Katz Rulz In bold black text and thin slacks as her curves were known. Black sneakers and black cut finger gloves; holding a large crimson book. Eyes were beautiful amethyst, expressed shyness but the rest of her face was covered with a golden mask. Most shocking thing was… she had large, fluffy animal ears; twitching and had a small little tail flickering…

Everyone dead silent; staring at how unique this girl was...- or how freaky she looked, yet in a beautiful way.

''My name is Maxine Yukisa Moonluna Orstar, but I go by the name Max. I'm different, but everyone is different here… so I hope I fit in the category.'' And flushed in nervousness, biting her lip as everyone stared at her… ''Well, Ms. Orstar; nice to meet you here…'' Mr. Mufflin said boringly and rolled his eyes, 'great, another weird freak…' he thought.

There were whistles and cheers, ''Maxine sit by me!'' said Cheech; staring lovely at her and a few other boys. Max blushed heavily, ears going flat and she smiled shyly. The girls glared at her in jealously, except that she is drawing all the boys attention.

Fanboy and Chum Chum was awestruck at how cool Maxine looked, but mostly it caught Fanboy's attention at how very pretty she was as well. 'Wow, she's so pretty… must be new around here.' Fanboy thought, and then beamed as he saw an empty seat beside him. ''Maxine! Max! Over here!'' He waved; gaining her attention to the empty seat, ''go sit next by that purple kid.'' Mr. Mufflin said and Maxine nodded….

Fanboy smiled as she sat next beside him, ''hi, I'm Fanboy!'' He held out his hand and Maxine returned the smile, ''I'm Maxine, but call me Max… or Star.''

''Cool name by the way.'' He said and studied her twitching ears. Are those some sort of accessory? Why were her eyes purple? Yet so… pretty? Fanboy couldn't understand why suddenly he's attracted to her. ''Why do you have animal ears?'' he asked and wished he hadn't…

Maxine eyes darkened; emotions of sadness, betrayal and anger all clouded into one. ''Something…. Really bad happened in my past.'' She said quietly; bangs shadowing her eyes.

''Oh…'' Fanboy mumbled and glanced at Chum Chum who was also staring sadly at Max. ''I made a greeting card for you!'' the boy quickly said, changing the subject as he gave her his greeting card and she blushed, ''i-is that for… me?'' she stuttered.

''Yeah! Just to say welcome!'' The teacher went up to the board to right some stuff down, ''okay students, we're going to do some division math…'' he mutters and wrote down a few division problems. It appeared rather complex, no one could answer it… ''I know the answer teacher!'' Kyle exclaimed, raising his hand desperately…

''Okay red head, go up to the board and answer it.'' Kyle dashed up to the board and scribbled down the answer, ''is this right?'' he said smirking in a prideful and the teacher shook his head. ''Nope, sorry kid… go back to your seat.'' The british gawked in horror that he answered the problem wrong.

''Anyone else?'' A few students had tried, yet failed for the complexity of the problem. Max hand slowly rose up, ''I think I can answer it sir.'' She said and stood up, ''okay, go to the board and see if you could be the one to figure it out.'' Strolling over to the board, Max picked up the chalked and instantly started dissecting into the problem, answering the problem with ease. ''Wow, Ms. Corwells. You have answered all the problems right…''

''My favorite subject is math.''

''Well, good for you… now take your seat.'' He said and she returned to her seat with students gawking at her. Fanboy admired Max's beauty and knowledge, ''wow… smart and pretty.'' He whispered, and then blushed because he never thought of a girl like her before…

Kyle stared jealously at Fanboy as Max smiled at him. Why did she have to sit next beside Fanboy of all things? ….Why… not beside him instead? Not like he likes her or anything! Just…. All suddenly attracted, so weird…

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