(Authors note:
this is my first chapter so I'd like criticism and I love feedback so.. yeah. anyway enjoy chapter one!)
Blazekit, Nightkit and Flowerkit of rushing cold tribe, played in a tree the three kits laughed Nightkit poked his tongue out"ha I'm too fast for you Flowerkit!" said the dark gray tom. "No! I'm much faster" said the small white she kit. The eldest orange tabby Blazekit stared "woah! did you hear that?" loud growls erupted from the bushes. It was either a clan or tribe. Blazekit stared "Nightkit Flowerkit! go! climb" Blazekit scrambled up the tree as he watched his kin try to climb. The cats glared they ran toward the tree. Blazekit stared as the cats caught the kits in the mouth. Everything faded. Blazekit couldn't remember anything after that.
(years later)
Blazepelt woke up to the sound of birds no other soul in sight. The tom started to walk around the ruins of his old tribe camp. Blazepelt sighed as he walked he suddenly perked his ears at the sound of rustling in bushes. Blazepelt got low to the ground grass tickling his stomach and lower body. He kept his eyes locked as suddenly he heard yowling and shouting. "Kill her. She's useless. She's weak!" a tom spat as another she-cat spat too her voice was muffled "She's some shiny. Shinies die. They all do." another voice spoke she was crying "please! I- I can help! I can serve you!" Blazepelt shuffled forward peeking at the cats.
Blazepelt stared he'd never seen these type of cats before. There was a black tom, a white she cat, a gray she cat and a crying brown tom. The black tom huffed. He had a dark red collar, he had green eyes and a white chest. "Deadsong kill her!" the tom said turning toward the gray she cat who had a mask over her face connecting to her collar "Shut up dead beat, Oaktail needs to learn to spill blood." the brown tom cried and attacked the white she cat "I'm sorry Willowclaw!" he killed her blood dripping from her neck as he lashed his claws across her. Deadbeat seemed pleased while Deadsong was huffing with annoyance "finally. We need to get back now" she said "sure. ugh Darkheart is going to be cross we took so long. Come Oaktail back to Slitthroat" the black tom said coldly. Blazepelt stared at the dead she cat ".. she was just a kit. That's.. against the warrior code. They murdered a she cat!" Blazepelt huffed about to feel sick.
Blazepelt suddenly felt cold claws striking him in the back it was the masked she cat "what are you doing there?" she growled. Deadbeat turned his gaze it was colder than he thought "It must be the new recruit." Oaktail interrupted "yeah, Darkheart did say that there was this new orange warrior called Sunblood." Deadbeat shot daggers at Blazepelt "are you Sunblood?" he asked staring. Blazepelt nodded "Yes. Of course I am." he said growling "Put me down or I'll have your throats." Deadsong stared "huh anyone who's as bossy as him must be a friend of darkheart." Deadsong released her claws from his back. Deadsong huffed "let's go."
(a few days of travelling)
Blazepelt stared he padded with the cats he felt like he shouldn't have lied but otherwise Starclan knows what would of happened to him? The cats suddenly stopped they flicked their ears and tails as a smooth, mischievous voice came from the trees. "oh welcome back I guess you got rid of that shiny pussy cat?" the tom said a black cat with a collar over his neck and a cold one eyed gaze. His yellow gaze pierced the cats bellow as he swished his tail with amusement. Deadbeat spoke back "yeah. She's been dealt with. We brought Sunblood. He's the new tom your brother's been talking about." the tom stretched and jumped down "well. That's interesting. Jack." he said smoothly to Blazepelt "what?" blazepelt said staring "Jack, my name's Jack." the black tom said his eyes were filled with mischievous behavior. Deadbeat Oaktail and Deadsong walked through the borders. As they left Jack's eye narrowed dangerously "you're not Sunblood are you?" he said coldly ready to attack.
(thanks for reading chapter one Sun rising! chapter two coming soon!