Love Hina
Back to the Beach House
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
Author's Time: Well, I'm trying to type up these stories and do my homework at the same time to bear with me ok? Enough said, enjoy my hope-to-be-a-smash-hit story! Also, once in awhile, I'm going to put songs (oldies most of the time) right into the text as their dialog, try to find as many as you can! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Prologue: It's been two years now…the ronin trio all got into Tokyo U, and after a long semester…they look forward to their summer break…(one thing, Naru still won't admit that she like Keitaro.)
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"What a beautiful day. And here I am, bored…" Keitaro looked outside his window. "Never knew that it can be so boring here over the summer…speaking of summer, what happed last summer?" He said to himself. "God Keitaro, can't you remember?" Keitaro jumbed back to see Naru's head upside down from the hole. She jumped down and entered the room. "We went to the Beach House by the sea that your aunt runs remember?" "O yeah! That's when we were stranded on an island, participated in a play, and you though I was taking advantage…never mind!" Naru glared at him. "Don't think I forgot about that Keitaro!" They just looked at each other then broke out laughing. "Man, we had such a great time back then…" Naru said. "Yeah I know, I wonder when Haruka will come and tell me to help her again." "I bet she'll just pop out of nowhere and tell us that we're going to help her again this year." Naru laid back. "Like that would happen, she went to Tokyo today. I highly doubt it…" All of a sudden Haruka appears in Keitaro's dresser. "Holy Crap!" Keitaro screamed. "Where did you come from Haruka?!" Naru asked while clinging to something. "Eh…Secret hole. Well well Naru, looks like you've gotten pretty close with Keitaro lately…" "What?!" Naru asked. She looked and saw that she was cling onto Keitaro and he was doing to same thing. "Don't touch me!" she screamed, punching him out of the window. "Wow, nice form…"
Chapter 1: Returning to the Beach House.
The whole gang was on the road, traveling to the beach. "Woohoo! Here we come!" Su yelled. Keitaro just sat there thinking. [Heh…the beach…I heard that off the Florada Keys, there's a place called Kokomo. That's where I want to go to get away from it all. I bet Naru would like to go also… Yeah, our bodies in the sand, with tropical drinks melting in our hands. There we'll be falling in love to the rhythm of the steel drum band, Down in Kokomo.] "Keitaro, you have a really eerie smile invading your face…" Naru poked him. "Ack! Sorry!" Keitaro jumped. "Why are you apologizing? O never mind…" Naru told him.
They finally reached the beach, all the girls went to change as Keitaro lugged all their things. "Come on you guys…help…me…" "Just a bit farther Keitaro." Haruka told him. They reached the Beach House and he dropped everything. It looked like exactly like the Beach House last year. "I thought you said that you're going to use the money to fix up this place! There is nothing has changed!" "Well that's untrue, look!" Haruka pointed to the weathervane. A sweat drop appeared on Keitaro's head. "Just a weathervane?" Haruka pointed to the changing rooms. "Well, we don't open 'til tomorrow…so go have fun or something…" Keitaro walked to he changing rooms and stopped at the door. "Wait a minute…last year, I walking into the wrong room…" He looked up to see the sign "men". Keitaro sighed with relief. "Ahh, nothing to worry about…" He open the door to see all the women changing. Keitaro just stood there. "Keitaro! You bloody bastard! Don't repeat what you did last year!" Motoko said, drawing out her blade. "What are you doing in the men's changing room!" Keitaro asked. "Hey dork, look up…" He did to see the sign say "Women". Then he looked back at the sign at the door to see that the sign was broken off at the front. "Ahh…the sign was broken so I thought…uh oh." Motoko used an aerial slash, knocking Keitaro out the door. "Take that!"
Keitaro sat down under the umbrella putting on sun tan lotion. Then a ball came out of nowhere and nailed him on the face. "Ow! Ow !Ow!" Keitaro rubbed his face. "Hey Keitaro, join us for some beach volleyball!" Kitsune offered. He just stared at Kitsune wearing a bikini but then snapped out of it. "Huh? What?" "O come on!" She grabbed his arm and dragged him across the ground. "Ack! Stop Kitsune! The sand is hot! I'm getting burned!" She pushed him on one side of the field. "Um…Kitsune! Wait!" "Service!" Kitsune yelled and served the ball. "Kitsune! I don't know how to play volleyball though!" Shinobu setted the ball up and Naru spiked it straight into Keitaro's face. "Kyahh! Sempai! You alright!" Shinobu called out for him. "Wow…that's going to leave a mark…" Motoko hovered over him. "Your telling me…" "Woohoo! Point!" Naru cheered. Sarah served from Naru's side and Su setted it up. "Get it Keitaro! Spike!" Keitaro got up and jumped into the air and spiked it towards Naru's feet. "Hey! Watch it!" She yelled at him. "Whoa…Urashima has hops…" Kitsume said to herself. "Nice drive Keitaro!" Su cheered. "Nice shot indeed, were you aiming for Naru?" Motoko asked. "What? Um…no! I had no control of it!" Keitaro told her. Naru picked up the ball and walked over to the net, jumped and threw the ball hitting Keitaro's head. "Fault!" Su yelled. "Sempai! You ok!"
"So what did you want to talk about Kitsune?" Naru said, walking along the beach with her. "O nothing much…we never get to talk to each other ever since you stared to studying for Tokyo U." "Yeah I know, I've been busy…but hey! Here we are now! So what do you want to talk about?" Kitsune thought for a minute. "I know! How things are going between you and Keitaro!" Naru twitched then continued walking. "There is nothing between us Kitsune…absolutely nothing!" "Uh huh…right…but tell me, what do you think of him?" "Heh…he's a spineless wimp, a pervert, and a dumb ass!"
Back where the girls set up camp…
"Ack!" Keitaro grabbed his heart and fell over. "You ok Sempai! What's wrong!" Keitaro slowly got up. "Dunno…felt like 3 swords just pierced my heart…"
Back to Naru and Kitsune…
"You still think he's that bad throughout the two years you have known him?" Kitsune raised her eyebrow. "Well…what do you think of him?" She scratched her head. "Well…I guess your right, over the years, it seems that he never changed…" Then, a ripped up guy came over to the two girls, showing off his muscles to them. "Hey gals…how about you and me go get a drink at the juice bar?" They both raised an eyebrow. "Do us a favor and rot in the corner over there will you…" Naru told him as they walked along. In the background, everyone is laughing at the guy's attempt to ask the girls out. "Wow Naru, you have some pretty harsh words." "Well, I just hate those kind of guys…exercising just to impress women…it's disgusting!" Kitsune laughed. "Man, Naru, you just love to play hard to get don't cha'. You know, I bet you couldn't go up to a guy and ask him out…your probably going to phyce out and run…" "That's not all ture!" Then, another guy came and asked them out. "O go away you low life!" Naru barked at him. He turned away and dragged his feet in the sand. "See that's what I mean Naru, your so up tight!" Naru looked at herself. "Really?" "Hey, you know, I bet you couldn't get that guy to rub sun tan lotion on your back without freaking out Naru." She turned to Kitsune and grabbed the san tan lotion. "You just watch!" She stomped away to the person Kitsune pointed out to. "Heh, now I'm going to see some really entertainment…mission accomplished!" Naru walked over to the man sun bathing, back towards the sun, wearing sun glasses. "Um…excuss me sir…but…" Slowly the man sat up and looked at her. "Um…can…you…pl..please help me put sun s…screan on my back?" Naru hesitated. "Hey Kitsune…what is Naru asking Sem…" Shinobu asked but was cut off by Kitsune. "Shhh! Hey Naru! As him out!" Naru turned to her, then turned back at him. "Um…well, want to get a drink some time?" "Sure…" he replied. Then he took off his sunglasses. Naru jumped back in surprised to see who it was. "Hey Naru, what's up? Want me to help you with that sun tan lotion now?" Keitaro asked. Naru took the bottle, poured it all over Keitaro and kicked him into the sea. "Screw you!" she yelled at him. Then she turned to Kitsune, who was breaking out, laughing her ass off. "You!" "Eep! Gotta run Shinobu…literally…" Kitsune ran and Naru followed her. "You knew did you! Come back here!" Naru yelled.
"Cheers!" They all yelled. Everyone was at a local pub, celebrating the start of summer. "Hope we get a good haul of people tomorrow morning." Haruka told them. "Do we have to wear bikinis and aprons again like last year?" Motoko asked. "Well, they reeled people in like fish…so yeah!" "Darn it…" Kitsune looked over at Keitaro. "Come on Keitaro! Drink up! Drink up!" "Yeah, I know…I just have to recover from that last blow from Naru…" "Well you were lucky…" Kitsune told him. "…at lease you weren't chased all over the beach!" "I was nearly drowning thanks to her!" Naru got up. "Ahem…don't forget I'm still here you guys…" "Oops…um…drastic times calls for drastic measures!" Kitsune said. So she pushed Keitaro to Naru and ran. Keitaro fell over and took down Naru with him. "Get off of me you klutz!" She told him, then realize that his face was buried in one of her breast. "You bastard!" She punched him, making him skip across the water. "Heh, well I guess we can't call it the beginning of summer without seeing Keitaro getting punked my Naru right guys?"
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Preview of Chapter 2 (well, not a preview for my previous fans…)
Shinobu just stood there, leaning against the rail, looking out at the sunset. "Hey Shinobu, you ok?" She turned around to see Naru. "Hey Naru, nothing is wrong, just thinking." "About what?" "Well…how do you know if someone loves you?" Naru was taken back at the answer, since she, herself, doesn't know the answer. "Hmm, well, you see…I think it's in that person's kiss." "Really? How about in his eyes?" "Well, no, your just being deceived…" Shinobu rubbed her chin. "O! How about in his face?" "No, that's just his charms…Shinobu, you want to know, if he loves you so, it's in his kiss…that's where it is…um, shoop shoop, shoop shoop…" Shinobu just looked at her confused. "Er…well, thanks anyway…"
Whew…done with the first chapter. Did you guys find the song I put in? Did you? Put the answer in your review. I'll continue doing this 'til the story is complete. Sit tight! The next chapter is coming soon! Promise!
Back to the Beach House
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
Author's Time: Well, I'm trying to type up these stories and do my homework at the same time to bear with me ok? Enough said, enjoy my hope-to-be-a-smash-hit story! Also, once in awhile, I'm going to put songs (oldies most of the time) right into the text as their dialog, try to find as many as you can! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Prologue: It's been two years now…the ronin trio all got into Tokyo U, and after a long semester…they look forward to their summer break…(one thing, Naru still won't admit that she like Keitaro.)
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"What a beautiful day. And here I am, bored…" Keitaro looked outside his window. "Never knew that it can be so boring here over the summer…speaking of summer, what happed last summer?" He said to himself. "God Keitaro, can't you remember?" Keitaro jumbed back to see Naru's head upside down from the hole. She jumped down and entered the room. "We went to the Beach House by the sea that your aunt runs remember?" "O yeah! That's when we were stranded on an island, participated in a play, and you though I was taking advantage…never mind!" Naru glared at him. "Don't think I forgot about that Keitaro!" They just looked at each other then broke out laughing. "Man, we had such a great time back then…" Naru said. "Yeah I know, I wonder when Haruka will come and tell me to help her again." "I bet she'll just pop out of nowhere and tell us that we're going to help her again this year." Naru laid back. "Like that would happen, she went to Tokyo today. I highly doubt it…" All of a sudden Haruka appears in Keitaro's dresser. "Holy Crap!" Keitaro screamed. "Where did you come from Haruka?!" Naru asked while clinging to something. "Eh…Secret hole. Well well Naru, looks like you've gotten pretty close with Keitaro lately…" "What?!" Naru asked. She looked and saw that she was cling onto Keitaro and he was doing to same thing. "Don't touch me!" she screamed, punching him out of the window. "Wow, nice form…"
Chapter 1: Returning to the Beach House.
The whole gang was on the road, traveling to the beach. "Woohoo! Here we come!" Su yelled. Keitaro just sat there thinking. [Heh…the beach…I heard that off the Florada Keys, there's a place called Kokomo. That's where I want to go to get away from it all. I bet Naru would like to go also… Yeah, our bodies in the sand, with tropical drinks melting in our hands. There we'll be falling in love to the rhythm of the steel drum band, Down in Kokomo.] "Keitaro, you have a really eerie smile invading your face…" Naru poked him. "Ack! Sorry!" Keitaro jumped. "Why are you apologizing? O never mind…" Naru told him.
They finally reached the beach, all the girls went to change as Keitaro lugged all their things. "Come on you guys…help…me…" "Just a bit farther Keitaro." Haruka told him. They reached the Beach House and he dropped everything. It looked like exactly like the Beach House last year. "I thought you said that you're going to use the money to fix up this place! There is nothing has changed!" "Well that's untrue, look!" Haruka pointed to the weathervane. A sweat drop appeared on Keitaro's head. "Just a weathervane?" Haruka pointed to the changing rooms. "Well, we don't open 'til tomorrow…so go have fun or something…" Keitaro walked to he changing rooms and stopped at the door. "Wait a minute…last year, I walking into the wrong room…" He looked up to see the sign "men". Keitaro sighed with relief. "Ahh, nothing to worry about…" He open the door to see all the women changing. Keitaro just stood there. "Keitaro! You bloody bastard! Don't repeat what you did last year!" Motoko said, drawing out her blade. "What are you doing in the men's changing room!" Keitaro asked. "Hey dork, look up…" He did to see the sign say "Women". Then he looked back at the sign at the door to see that the sign was broken off at the front. "Ahh…the sign was broken so I thought…uh oh." Motoko used an aerial slash, knocking Keitaro out the door. "Take that!"
Keitaro sat down under the umbrella putting on sun tan lotion. Then a ball came out of nowhere and nailed him on the face. "Ow! Ow !Ow!" Keitaro rubbed his face. "Hey Keitaro, join us for some beach volleyball!" Kitsune offered. He just stared at Kitsune wearing a bikini but then snapped out of it. "Huh? What?" "O come on!" She grabbed his arm and dragged him across the ground. "Ack! Stop Kitsune! The sand is hot! I'm getting burned!" She pushed him on one side of the field. "Um…Kitsune! Wait!" "Service!" Kitsune yelled and served the ball. "Kitsune! I don't know how to play volleyball though!" Shinobu setted the ball up and Naru spiked it straight into Keitaro's face. "Kyahh! Sempai! You alright!" Shinobu called out for him. "Wow…that's going to leave a mark…" Motoko hovered over him. "Your telling me…" "Woohoo! Point!" Naru cheered. Sarah served from Naru's side and Su setted it up. "Get it Keitaro! Spike!" Keitaro got up and jumped into the air and spiked it towards Naru's feet. "Hey! Watch it!" She yelled at him. "Whoa…Urashima has hops…" Kitsume said to herself. "Nice drive Keitaro!" Su cheered. "Nice shot indeed, were you aiming for Naru?" Motoko asked. "What? Um…no! I had no control of it!" Keitaro told her. Naru picked up the ball and walked over to the net, jumped and threw the ball hitting Keitaro's head. "Fault!" Su yelled. "Sempai! You ok!"
"So what did you want to talk about Kitsune?" Naru said, walking along the beach with her. "O nothing much…we never get to talk to each other ever since you stared to studying for Tokyo U." "Yeah I know, I've been busy…but hey! Here we are now! So what do you want to talk about?" Kitsune thought for a minute. "I know! How things are going between you and Keitaro!" Naru twitched then continued walking. "There is nothing between us Kitsune…absolutely nothing!" "Uh huh…right…but tell me, what do you think of him?" "Heh…he's a spineless wimp, a pervert, and a dumb ass!"
Back where the girls set up camp…
"Ack!" Keitaro grabbed his heart and fell over. "You ok Sempai! What's wrong!" Keitaro slowly got up. "Dunno…felt like 3 swords just pierced my heart…"
Back to Naru and Kitsune…
"You still think he's that bad throughout the two years you have known him?" Kitsune raised her eyebrow. "Well…what do you think of him?" She scratched her head. "Well…I guess your right, over the years, it seems that he never changed…" Then, a ripped up guy came over to the two girls, showing off his muscles to them. "Hey gals…how about you and me go get a drink at the juice bar?" They both raised an eyebrow. "Do us a favor and rot in the corner over there will you…" Naru told him as they walked along. In the background, everyone is laughing at the guy's attempt to ask the girls out. "Wow Naru, you have some pretty harsh words." "Well, I just hate those kind of guys…exercising just to impress women…it's disgusting!" Kitsune laughed. "Man, Naru, you just love to play hard to get don't cha'. You know, I bet you couldn't go up to a guy and ask him out…your probably going to phyce out and run…" "That's not all ture!" Then, another guy came and asked them out. "O go away you low life!" Naru barked at him. He turned away and dragged his feet in the sand. "See that's what I mean Naru, your so up tight!" Naru looked at herself. "Really?" "Hey, you know, I bet you couldn't get that guy to rub sun tan lotion on your back without freaking out Naru." She turned to Kitsune and grabbed the san tan lotion. "You just watch!" She stomped away to the person Kitsune pointed out to. "Heh, now I'm going to see some really entertainment…mission accomplished!" Naru walked over to the man sun bathing, back towards the sun, wearing sun glasses. "Um…excuss me sir…but…" Slowly the man sat up and looked at her. "Um…can…you…pl..please help me put sun s…screan on my back?" Naru hesitated. "Hey Kitsune…what is Naru asking Sem…" Shinobu asked but was cut off by Kitsune. "Shhh! Hey Naru! As him out!" Naru turned to her, then turned back at him. "Um…well, want to get a drink some time?" "Sure…" he replied. Then he took off his sunglasses. Naru jumped back in surprised to see who it was. "Hey Naru, what's up? Want me to help you with that sun tan lotion now?" Keitaro asked. Naru took the bottle, poured it all over Keitaro and kicked him into the sea. "Screw you!" she yelled at him. Then she turned to Kitsune, who was breaking out, laughing her ass off. "You!" "Eep! Gotta run Shinobu…literally…" Kitsune ran and Naru followed her. "You knew did you! Come back here!" Naru yelled.
"Cheers!" They all yelled. Everyone was at a local pub, celebrating the start of summer. "Hope we get a good haul of people tomorrow morning." Haruka told them. "Do we have to wear bikinis and aprons again like last year?" Motoko asked. "Well, they reeled people in like fish…so yeah!" "Darn it…" Kitsune looked over at Keitaro. "Come on Keitaro! Drink up! Drink up!" "Yeah, I know…I just have to recover from that last blow from Naru…" "Well you were lucky…" Kitsune told him. "…at lease you weren't chased all over the beach!" "I was nearly drowning thanks to her!" Naru got up. "Ahem…don't forget I'm still here you guys…" "Oops…um…drastic times calls for drastic measures!" Kitsune said. So she pushed Keitaro to Naru and ran. Keitaro fell over and took down Naru with him. "Get off of me you klutz!" She told him, then realize that his face was buried in one of her breast. "You bastard!" She punched him, making him skip across the water. "Heh, well I guess we can't call it the beginning of summer without seeing Keitaro getting punked my Naru right guys?"
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Preview of Chapter 2 (well, not a preview for my previous fans…)
Shinobu just stood there, leaning against the rail, looking out at the sunset. "Hey Shinobu, you ok?" She turned around to see Naru. "Hey Naru, nothing is wrong, just thinking." "About what?" "Well…how do you know if someone loves you?" Naru was taken back at the answer, since she, herself, doesn't know the answer. "Hmm, well, you see…I think it's in that person's kiss." "Really? How about in his eyes?" "Well, no, your just being deceived…" Shinobu rubbed her chin. "O! How about in his face?" "No, that's just his charms…Shinobu, you want to know, if he loves you so, it's in his kiss…that's where it is…um, shoop shoop, shoop shoop…" Shinobu just looked at her confused. "Er…well, thanks anyway…"
Whew…done with the first chapter. Did you guys find the song I put in? Did you? Put the answer in your review. I'll continue doing this 'til the story is complete. Sit tight! The next chapter is coming soon! Promise!