I personally think Bioshock's ending sucked, but in a good way. I'm going to write along the lines of the neutral/good endings. If you don't know, the neutral ending is when you pick to sacrifice yourself and Eleanor then talks about being alone, and sets Delta by the water. The good is when you save all the Sisters.

As the last bits of life died out of him, I pulled Father away from the water and then crossed his hands over his chest sitting down next to him. I looked at his helmet for a few momentsdeciding that I wouldn't take his helmet off. I had seen his face once, and I don't wish to realize that experience. When Mother…no…I refuse to call her that anymore. She doesn't deserve me as a daughter.

When Sofia Lamb had him Hypnotized and told him to shoot himself, right in front of my young eyes, I ot a glimpse of the man once known as Johnny Topside. But that was years ago. That was before I had enacted my plan to bring him back, to save him.

And I failed. Although I had managed to save some of the Little Sisters, I could not save Father.

I ran my hands across his helmet, thinking of what it would be like to be trapped in there. I was not trapped in mine. It could be removed, albeit with great difficulty. My Big Sister Suit was made of spare parts, fueled by a will to escape.

Escape with my Father. And that we did, fighting side by side. I remembered watching him, full of life, as he fought back armies of Splicers, Alphas, and all of Rapture's demons; all to protect me, like he had always done. So I then laid my head on his massive chest and began sobbing. "Daddy, don't go…I-I miss you…I'm so s-sorry…"

Eleanor's last thought before she fell into sleep with the setting sun, the Sisters watching her from inside the bathysphere, was this; what now?


I watched as the mysterious girl's body went limp with exhaustion and grief. But through my mind, through my veins, and through my heart, adrenaline pumped. As of now, a denizen of hell had escaped. Someone with with secrets had escaped.

Rapture....Has...Escaped...

All right, I know its a short teaser, and this is NOT a one-shot! If I get enough readers I may have her return to Rapture, in good time. Things to look forward to:


Meeting of Rapture's greatest hero (besides Delta)

The fate of Sofia Lamb.

What Eleanor will now do, amongst the normal world.

Review and I'll write more!!! And another note: Please tell me if I seem to be shifting from Eleanor's POV to a 3rd person POV. Its been bugging me. Thx!