Final Destination 4

Memo: This is going to be in movie form. It isn't that good, because it is in this format but I will also post another one called the same thing but in story format.

Act I

Scene I

Setting: Train Station. Many people scattered here and there.

Shots: Close Up, Long Shot
Time in whole Scene: 14 minutes

Man and Woman standing there, Woman has tears in her eyes
Shot: Close Up

Annie: Come home safe darling Dabs at cheek with White hankercheif. Tears falling ever few minutes.

Zack: Kisses wife on cheek I'll be back in about three or four months. Goodbye hug Picks up duffel bag and boards the #180 train to California.

Move to Drucilla
Shot: Long Shot

Drucilla: Bye mom

Woman: Are you sure you have everything?

Dru: Yes mother said with an eye roll

Woman: Okay, Well your father and I are going to miss you a lot.
Dru: It's only for a few months. Hugs mother, Waves and boards the #180 train.

Move to Matthew:
Shot: Long Shot

Matthew: See you in a few weeks.

Friend Ian: You better man Hug(

Matthew: laughs Will Do! waves and boards the #180 Train with duffel bag in hand and messenger bag on the shoulder.

Move to The #180 Train
Shot: Long Shot

Conductor: Last call for passengers, for 180 to California. Trains Starts to move. Train whistle blows.


Tell Me what you guys think. If you guys like it I will post more, if not I will get rid of it. I am thinking of changing it to story format and then posting, but if you guys don't like it then I won't post it.