Darkgamma reporting! Welcome to my first fanfic. I'll be taking suggestions. If you don't have something good or useful to say, then don't review.
I won't be taking crap. Have fun reading! Darkgamma out!
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After failing for the second time, Naruto felt pathetic. Most children give up on their ninja future after the second failure at the Ninja Academy. His jumpsuit was bright, his attitude happy but his heart sad and faint.
He was crushed as his clones were a joke, his replacement horrible and his Henge no jutsu awful. As he walked towards his apartment he noticed that Ichiraku ramen stand was full. He just growled and continued down the road.
Once he got home he went to bed to get some rest. His home was chaotic, scrolls scattered around the place. To suppress the pain and sorrow in him he just bit his tong. Blood started to fall onto his closed eyes. He was asleep now, knocked out by the pain.
In the morning he washed his face with water and soap, cleaned it from blood and patched up his wounded tong. To heal his soul he ate breakfast, old ramen and ancient, cold milk. "Third time's the charm…" He said in sorrow and continued eating.
We now see him walking down the street as people stare at him coldly. He wore a giant smile, a fake one you could say. His eyes were cold and closed. He just masked his pain, feeling the cold stares. The sun was setting. "The kami himself hates me." He cursed himself. He sat at Ichiraku ramen only to see new employees that hated him. "What do you want to order, brat?" Asked a black-haired man. "Two miso ramen." The blonde responded. "Two miso ramen, chef!" Yelled the man. He wore a kitchen outfit. "Miso ramen coming up!" Said a familiar, young voice. "Who are you, anyway?" The boy asked. "Serve it, Kayumi." Said the chef as he passed over the ramen. "Kayumi, eh? Whatever…" The teen said as he finished his lunch. It was night.
'What did I do to deserve this? First exam and now the second… Karma sucks.' He thought. 'I'm just a spot that needs cleaning, a monster that needs to be killed.'
"Wake up! Wake up, kid!" Yelled Kayumi.
"Shut up…" Naruto responded. "What?" Kayumi shouted as he was insulted.
"Shut up, dobe." "Now you little de… brat!" The waiter's blood was starting to boil.
"Shut up, Uchiha-teme…" The blonde continued the as Kayumi realized that the teen wasn't talking to him. "Here's your bill, boy." This snapped the boy out of his thoughts as the waiter didn't insult him like almost everybody else. "How much?" The spiky blonde asked. "One hundred ryo." The chef responded as Naruto opened his wallet. He put a few coins on the table and left, lost in the shadows of the night.
"I'm home." He shouted with a smile and washed his hands. He watched the sunrise throughout the window. "So, it's morning already?" The teen said with a small bit of surprise and happiness in his voice. He then dressed into his sleeping odor, leaving the jumpsuit on the chair.
The blonde now exited his home in his usual jumpsuit. He met with the same looks as always, despise and hate, fear and anger. "This brat…" Everyone kept saying as Naruto took his brush and paint. "He's never taking anything serious!" The boy raised his head and ran off towards the library.
"A little orange here, a little white there!" He went destroying the library from the outside. In a matter of moments he drew himself as a king, in a very horrible manner. He was caught by the library guard who beat him up until the blonde was pink-blue. The teen was then forced to wash his picture and to sort every scroll in the library. He stole a couple of ninjutsu and taijutsu scrolls and smuggled them out.
In his home, on the floor, he opened a blue ninjutsu scroll only to see very complex handsings and various Katon and Fuuton jutsu. He took a deep breath and made a few handsings to try out a Katon jutsu. He blew his breath in hope that it'll work but he only fired a few sparks. He tried over and over again until he made a small flame burst. He then collapsed of chakra exhaustion.
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"I'm worried about Naruto… Most of the volunteers for the academy give up after their second year… But Naruto, he's going to kill himself, literally, of chakra exhaustion." Said a chunin, he was wearing a Leaf headband, he had green pants and blue ninja sandals and he wore a Konoha ninja jacket. He had brown hair and a scar across his nose. "Don't worry." Said a figure as he turned. He was similarly dressed as the chunin. He had red hair and purple eyes.
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It was morning. Naruto woke up and saw a figure in front of him. He then immediately jumped up, made handsings and yelled. "Fireball Jutsu!!" He then blew a little fire towards the person. "Wait boy." The man said. His violet eyes looked into the boy's blue ones.
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Fun, was it? I think that you know who's this 'violet-eyed' crook is. Or do you?
Why is it so obvious? It isn't. Find a difference between this guy and that chunin that talked to Iruka. Please review and make suggestions. Remember what I said: I don't take crap! Pairings not decided, except one: Naruto&Hinata. So remember, it is your call.