Hi. This is my first Fanfiction that I have ever published. I will take any criticism because that measn you at least read it! On to the actual story. This is a prologue to Undertale: Second Chance, an in-progress story. It is still being worked on with another writer friend of mine. I hope you enjoy this story. But before we get started, a couple of bulletins to keep in mind.
In this story, Frisk is a girl, though I will still be using they.
In this story, Chara is not evil.
And most importantly, this is mine and my friend's interpretation of Undertale. Think whatever you like. It is a great game.
There were four Goddesses. The God of Creation, Clara, the God of Mystery (life after death), Melody, the God of Death, Lily, and the God of Life, Vivian. To create her children, Clara gave her life to bring Melody, Lily, and Vivian to rule the multiverse she had made. They vowed to protect and secure her legacy. And with that, Clara, the first being in existence, died.
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The tragedy of Grettinburg was great. Thousands died and the Heavens themselves wept. Everyone died. No one was left after the disaster. Except seven. Seven beautiful children with different Soul colors. No one for them to raise. They would die. But the Heavens took pity on them. They were taken in. They were the seven angels of Heaven.
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Many years later, the war with monsters began. It was brutal. The Heavens quaked at the horror. Thousands of monsters were murdered. It seemed like another Grettinburg. But they were Determined to NEVER let that happen again. The seven angels of Heaven took up their human forms and sealed them in the mountain in hopes they might survive. This was done for the monsters. It had always been for their sake.
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Frisk was not of the seven original angels. She came after. Melody found her in the wreckage and took them in. They were so small. And she looked just like one of her children. They even shared their Soul color. Frisk became a good-mannered child. There were many portraits done of the happy family. No one could deny how splendid the Heavens were, blessed with eight angels.
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But one of the angels couldn't bear having monsters trapped in the mountain. She herself had been in an abusive family, who often locked her in her own closet for days on end. She was Determined to help them. She offered herself as a sacrifice to free monsters form their imprisonment. She begged for the chance to make amends. Finally, Melody, Lily and Vivian agreed to send her down, promising that the gates would wait for her sweet return. For Chara had been the prize of the Heavens. But she would not return.