Yay!!! My first story!!! I hope you guys like it! R & R, and I'll give you virtual chocolate, because chocolate is the answer, no matter what the question is!!! :D
Love Always, MC
Disclaimer- Sadly, I don't own the characters or the book, Maximum Ride, blah blah blah... Yeah, but I do own this story, so if you take it, NO VIRTUAL CHOCOLATE FOR YOU!!!! Thank you! ;P
Fang's POV
There she was- lying on the ground. The tears were pouring from her eyes. I wanted so much to help her, but it was impossible. I crawled over to where she was lying, and put my hands on her face. "I love you," I whispered. I sensed an Eraser behind me. Suddenly, everything went black.
Four Days Earlier:
Max's POV
"Maxmaxmaxmaxmax!!! Guess what?!? Angel and I went out to pick strawberries when you were asleep- wow! You were asleep for a reeeeeeeeeally long time! Anyway, we were picking strawberries and this cute little-"
By that time, I had my hand over mouth to stop the incessant chatting coming from the Nudge Channel- All Nudge, All the Time.
"Nudge! Go downstairs and have breakfast. I'm getting up," I mumbled groggily.
Nudge darted out onto the staircase, and paused.
"Max, you're not getting up!" she complained.
"Well Nudge, if you would give me more than three seconds to get ready, I would be up," I retorted.
"Okay Max!" she exclaimed. "See you downstairs."
She darted down the winding staircase to the kitchen, where Mom and Iggy were making pancakes.
I rolled out of bed, hitting the floor with a loud thump. Rubbing my eyes, I descended the stairs, preparing for total chaos. Gazzy, Nudge, and Angel were hovering around Total, who was being manipulated by Angel into behaving like a robot.
"Ange, how many times have I told you- no controlling people's minds!" I reprimanded.
"Well, technically," muttered the Gasman, "Total's not really a person."
"You see? I have to put up with this all day!" Total whined.
I walked over to Fang, who was sitting at the table, deep in thought.
"Mornin' Sunshine," I joked, giving him a quick peck on the cheek.
"You're up," he said.
"It's about time" Iggy retorted.
"Hey Mom. Where's Ella?" I asked my mother.
"I'm not sure," she replied. "She's probably still snoozing."
I had a quick plate of pancakes, and dragged Fang out to the pond in the backyard.
"Fang," I started, "I was wondering, about Bridged… In Antarctica, you were paying a lot of attention to her."
"Max, you don't have to be jealous," he responded. "You know that I love you."
"I know, but-"
He stopped me, pressing his lips to mine. I kissed him back, noticing how his lips tasted dark, sexy. We kissed passionately, and I ended the kiss after a few minutes.
"I love you," I told him.
Boom! I heard a gunshot close by, and quickly stood up.
"Fang! Come on!" I shouted.
He didn't respond. I looked at him, and noticed that his arm was hanging limp at his side, blood trickling down. He had been shot.
Ohhhhhhhhhhh!! My first cliffie! Yaaayyyy! *MC JUMPS FOR JOY, SCREAMS, AND RUNS AWAY. YOU CAN HEAR HER TRIP IN THE DISTANCE...* O_o