Disclaimer = I do not own Harry Potter that is owned by J.K. Rowling. The story line is mine thought so.
Warnings = death of children (non detailed) hell of a lot of saddness, Alternative Universe that's it for now.
Hiya, yer ano I still havent finished 'lonely nights' but I'm a bit stuck with it at the moment so I thought I'd post another up. Will be Yoais (gay love) but not till WAY later.
This has actually been on me computer for a while but it was an original story. I desided to change it to include Harry Potter characters, why? Who knows but it reads actually well :D.
Any way, enough from me heres the first chapter enjoy ^_^.
Cursed
Espa one of the five grand continents of Algira. Espa mean, in their ancient tong, peaces. They have no leader only the guidance of the grand master priest and of course the rules that there goddess, Heatd of life, gave them. For this land there undying words are law and to disobeying these undying words, it would come with such unspeakable consequences that no one dare defy it. For though who do, they are nether hear for again; Except for the only the feared arrival of the death letter telling there disgraced family that they have been forgiven for the unforgivable sin and gone on to a better place. A place where all must visit one dreadful day.
In a peaceful village of Maria, name after it founder the brave worrier of Espa Juliet Maria demi, something wonderful was about to happen, the one they had anticipated for exactly 9 month, a new born baby was coming. In front of the church's door sat a impassions young man, James, and his best friend Sirius.
Faint cry of a woman pain could be herd from the dark, deeps of the church. "Why does it take so long?" groaned James. "Alright I know you can't wait but thing like this take time. Rushed we might lose more than one person" Sirius had always been the more sensible out of the two friends. Tension built as long, dragged out minutes turned in to whole, horrible hours. Silence thought out. Sirius, unable to take the long, lingering silence,
"So, James what do you want the baby to be called"
James sprung up like a cheater at his friend in shock. Stunning his unprepared friend with the surprised attack. James tuck, five, deep, breaths. Sirius creep out his corner like a frighten rabbit seeing if danger had gone. "Sorry about that" said James, James trembled from head to toe.
"I don't know what came over me" taking a second to gain the courage to speak, Sirius place a trembling hand upon his skit afrenic friend "It ok. Just don't do it again." Sirius clamed down a bit when James didn't do it again
"So what are you going to call the baby or is it just going to be 'baby'" James thought long and hard, around them the wind fell still, bird stop sing there love to each other.
Up in the trees, cackling crows cluster on to the frail branches of the sol dieing tree across from the dreary temple. Each of the crows had the same silky black feathers; apart from one, this one had tatty feathers, rough to the touch.
"Well, Harry sound nice. I think it going to be a hansom young man, so Harry should do" James finally replied. "Yer, for a boy, what if it a girl?" Sirius cheep "I don't think it going to be a girl. I don't know I just got this strange feeling it going to be a boy, I mean I understand why but…" James stud there in an other long deep thought "I thing if it a girl. Which I think it will by the way, you should call it Raina" shouted Sirius.
James snapped out of his deep thought, and a huge grin covered his tanned face. "Alright mister know-it-all if your right I'll call it Raina and if your wrong you have to be my slave for, let see two weeks and I'm still calling him Harry" Sirius grinned a much more sinister grin
"I've got a better idea, who ever is right has to do the tell everyone there most embarrassing secret. And be the winner slave for six, whole, week" Sirius stared at his friend, and waited for that little twinkle that shone bright when ever he feels rather daring. There. There it was,
"Ok hot shot I'm game. Get ready for the worst six week of your life. I'll have you cleaning rocks in my garden all day" James trusted his arm out towards his cheerful friend.
"I thought we where past meaning less tasks by now" Sirius followed suet to James, and shake each others hand firmly; Crow fly up high in to the clear blue sky cackling with much satisfaction.
While, in the church, the baby had been born, quite some time ago. There was a complication. The mother was fine, she sleep happily after her struggle to give birth. The baby, however, had something wrong with it.
It wasn't sick, nor deformed nor did it bare mark of death.
Careless all the priest agreed the child was filled with something powerful and dangerous to their goddess. the only way to stop what was to come was, regrettable, to kill it.
However they never got the chance. Someone tuck the child while they deliberated.
When the mother, Lily , woke up for her peaceful slumber, they called James in, but only James.
"We have most grave news about your newborn" announced one of the distinguished, elderly priests. His wrinkled old face showed no remorse, no sorrow, no fear. It bore no feeling at all. The loving couple clanged onto each other for support. There expression said only one thing. Despair. What had become of there beloved child. "Your child has been tainted long before it was born. I'm afraid your child is pure evil and must be eliminated or this glorious world we live in will be destroyed!"
Tears pored from there eyes, quickly making their way down there soft cheek, onto each other.
"However the abomination has been stolen." Unable to hold on any more Lily crashed into her lovers arm and sobbed with all her heart.
James tried to remain strong for her. Horrible thought filled Lily 's had 'my first child taken away. With out even seeing it sweet face even just one time, that all I want wanted to see it smiling face'.
A decreed was sent to every temple, of every village to be opened on, the 8 hour. Of the 4th day. The priest of each temple gathered the villages in to the holy hollowed hall of the old cumbering temples. They waited.
Waited for the 8 hour.
Of the 4 day.
Time tick away anticipation filled the compressed hall, but the silence never broke. On the 8 hour the priest stud to address the villages. They opened the distinguished scroll. And read out loud it important massage:
Dear priest and villages of are proud nation.
We regrettable inform you of a child, which has been born in the Village of Maria four days and eight hours ago. This child has been born evil and we need are own loyal citizens to help dispose of this abomination. We have tried to take care of this problem but it was stolen before proper pecorinos could be taken.
May Heatd light be with you in your search?
They set fire to the orphaned, burn with there rage. Smoke chock all of the inhabitants, blocked by thought who swore to protected them.
How could all this come from one child? Men ravage the slumbering land in hope of finding it, but to no avail. For the child was no longer in that land that craved for her death anymore.
Travailing leisurely down the river Sogno a small fishing boat glided down, unknowingly carrying a man and a newly born baby. The man was tall muscular, slime. He dressed all in black, with a hood, compleating covering every part of his identity. Brushing a tatty back feather that grazed the top of his smooth hand away he looked into the sunset had graced the land of peace, then down to the little important bundle, lovingly wrapped within his arms.
"Please young child, remember your homeland well. Because you will return to show them your power" His soft but deep voice brushed passed the baby cheek which set off a sweet giggle. For now Harry, the child of hope, had escape to see many more bright beautiful sunset.
Till he was need for his destiny.
Well that's the first chapter done.
Please review and tell me what you think. If I don't think its well like I may take it off because I'm not to sure about it in the first place.
Please review. And no flames, they are evil and will be sent to hell. Bye xXxXx