Hello! I'm new to this and ready to share my stories! This is my first story so please review on what you think I need to improve or what you like about it. I will try to post often (more on the weekends) so please review on what you think, and thank you!
-Chapter 1:
My name is Elie, and this is my story. You might not believe me, I wouldn't believe it my self, if I hadn't lived through it. It started when I was 13, in 7th grade. I was new to this school, Buckern Hill Middke School. I was all alone, I tried to make friends, but no one liked new kids. The thing is that, the only reason I enrolled into this school is because of what happened at my last school. Every one bullied me. But that's a story for a next time. So again, I was all alone, and when lunch came, I had no where to sit...-
This is awful! I think, I hope I make friends. I look around the cafeteria to see that everyone has someone next to them, except this one kid. He's a boy, and I saw him in my biology class a hour ago. Since he seems to have 0 friends, like me, I go and sit at that table. "What are you doing?" The strange lonely boy asked. "Obviously sitting here" I say. I hope I made the right choice to sit here. I could smell his food, his delicious ham and turkey in his sandwich. I snap out of it. I have to seem normal, like a normal human, I think. "But...why? No one likes me, im a no body" the strange boy says. The thing is that, he says it as if it doesn't bother him, like he is used to it? I don't know. "We'll I'm new and nobody likes me either, and I have no friends..." I say, a little pain in my chest. I have no friends, I think. Why? I'm a freak, I think. "We'll then, what should I call you?" He asked. "Elie Liveil" I say. Hmm, I think this bot might just be my new friend. "Well, I'm Kip..." He says. He goes back to eating the sand whitch again. I also start eating mine. "So...what's your favriote movie?" I ask, trying to make a conversation. He looks down as is shy and says, "I don't got one, I haven't seen much movies, I'm not normal you know." He says. Normal. Ha! If he only knew what I was. "Well, me too! I haven't seen much either, and I'm also not normal!" I say, wait...why did I say that?! I must be out of must mind, but hey! Kip looks surprised and happy. I guess we're friends. "I haven't heard much music or any of those stuff either" I say with a side smile. I think I might actually enjoy this school year. With Kip, my new friend, probally my only friend for this whole year, but I'm grateful. Lunch ends soon, and Kip and I go our own ways. I don't see him for the rest of the day until P.E. They're two team captains out of the whole grade, and they slowey pick people. Of course all the popular ones and athletes get picked first, and guess who is one of the last ones to get picked, me. I may look weak, but I'm really not. But, I'm not allowed to show my strength, because I could knock out a human any time. The game starts and I guess this is dodge ball. I allow myself to get hit first, because I don't want to use any strength, because I'm afraid. Afraid that people might notice that I'm not normal. And guess what. Kip decides to get out too. And he sits by me. We start talking, as if we have been friends for a while. This is actually cool and all, to have a friend, a HUMAN friend, or as I thought...
Cliffhanger?
Ok so my stories will be longer or shorter, depends what you guys want! Please review!