Hey my name is Joya! I'm fifteen years old. I love to read and write! But I haven't had the idea of a story for awhile now until my friend showed me this website. I read the twilight serious awhile back and every now and again I pick one of the books and read them over. After I read eclipse for the one hundredth time I kept thinking about the girl at the end, Bree, The newborn who surrendered who the Voltori killed. I wondered what she was like before she got turned into a vampire and what she would be like if they allowed her to live. Would she keep up with the Cullen's "diet?" Would she stay with them? What if she had a special talent? If so what would it be? I had all these questions and I really wish they would have given her a chance to live. It would have been interesting to see a girl my age handle a big change like that. I let my imagination run wild and soon the character Bree came to life in my head. Here is what I came up with Enjoy.

"Hello is anyone home?" my friend Thomas waved his hand in front of my face. "Wh- What?" I said trying to gain my

focus back. I sat up from lying across the hood of Thomas's car. We were parked outside my ballet class waiting for

our friend Yuki to come out. "What are you thinking about so hard?" Thomas asked sitting down next to me. I sighed

"My mom kicked my dad out yesterday. Can you believe that?" He put his arm around me and rubbed my shoulder.

"Wow, why did she do that?" "She told me that she didn't put him out but that he wanted to leave." I looked up into his

face. "I don't believe that. He wouldn't do that he loves Kelly and I too much to just leave!" His green eyes looked into

mine he looked especially handsome today. His long thick black hair was pulled back into a ponytail which showed his

prominent cheek bones and his strong jaw. His skin was a beautiful caramel color. My eyes traced his full lips as he

spoke. "Well have you talked to your dad about it?" "No, I'm kind of scared that... that..." I trailed of. "Afraid that your

mom is right" he finished for me. I didn't answer just turned my head avoiding his eyes.

Yuki finally walked out of the building saving us from an awkward silence. "Sorry I took so long" she said walking up

to the car. "Mrs. Robinson was giving me a lecture on improving my pirouettes." She grinned. We got into the car,

Thomas driving, me in the passenger seat, and Yuki in the backseat. "So where are we going?" Yuki asked leaning over

the shoulder of my seat. "My house first I have to change out of my dance clothes, than were going wherever Thomas

takes us, Right Thomas?" I smiled at him angelically. He looked at me from the corner of his eyes. "Nope," sorry girls

but I have places to go today." Yuki groaned "Aww come on! You're the only one of us who has a car!" "Yea, what do

you expect us to do?" I said. "Where do you have to go that's more important than driving your two best friends

around?" Yuki asked.

He looked at both of us. "I have plans." he said. "With who?" Yuki asked. I didn't say anything I knew that look he was

planning on ditching us for his girlfriend Candy. We reached my house he pulled up in the driveway. I looked at him

coldly "Candy," I said. He avoided my gaze. "Her again!" Yuki said folding her arms and leaning back in the seat like a

child who was just told they weren't getting McDonalds. "Yea so what she is my girlfriend you guys aren't" Ouch that

stung a little. Although Thomas didn't know it I longed to be his girlfriend. The one who got all his attention the one he

spent all his time with. Although Yuki and I spent must of our day with Thomas. Still I wanted him all to myself. To

stay wrapped in his arms for him to love ME. "Well I guess we have to find something else to do Yuki." I didn't look

over at Thomas just opened the car door and stepped out. "You coming?" I asked Yuki. She opened the door and

smacked Thomas on the back of the head. "Ouch!" he shouted grabbing the back of his head with one hand and

swinging at Yuki she dodged him and hopped out the car. "That was uncalled for." He complained still rubbing the

back of his head. "I didn't hit you that hard." Yuki said sticking out her tongue. I folded my arms "have fun with Candy

I said her name like it was a dirty word.

He didn't say anything as I glared at him through the windshield. He stared back at me his expression blank. He shook

his head and put the car in reverse pulled out of the driveway and speed down the street. He didn't look back. Yuki put

her around me like Thomas did earlier "I swear he can be a jerk sometimes." She said. "You okay?" she asked truly

concerned now. She was fully aware of my attraction to Thomas. "Yea ill be alright." Let's go inside and change. You

can wear something of mine." I told her. We walked into my house as soon as we got in my little sister Kelly came

running "Bree! Bree you're finally home! She shouted running into me and clutching my leg. "Hey Kelly belly, Yuki

said. She gasped dramatically slapping her chubby hands to her face. "Yuki is here!" she shouted again. I put my hands

to my ears. Wow were did that girl get that wind. Yuki screamed right along with her like they were meeting again for

the first time in a long time.

"What's all this raucous about." My mom appeared around the corner from the kitchen "It's just us mom" I said she

was the last person I wanted to see. We had got into a big argument earlier today after she put my dad out. "Oh, Hey

Yuki." She said smiling. "How was dance practice?" she was avoiding me as long as she could I could tell. She never

asked us how ballet class went. "It was great Mrs. Johnson!" Yuki shoot me a confused look she knew my mom almost

as well as I did. She was over my house everyday. "Good, well dinners almost ready so you girls get cleaned up." "Ok,"

I said flatly. She gave me that we- need- to- talk- look. I had nothing to say to her I act like I hadn't seen it and turned to

go up the stairs to my room Yuki followed.

We entered my room at the end of the hall and I closed the door behind us. Yuki plopped down on my blue coach I sat

on the bed and laid down. Closing my eyes I got lost in my thoughts again. I thought about my father how he was no

longer here. I haven't heard from him since yesterday when my fantastic mom kicked him out. I replayed the scene in my

head. My dad came in from work and my mom pounced on him as quick as a cat catching a mouse. She was frustrated

with him about a whole bunch of little things like why he didn't call he always calls her when he was at work, but lately

he hasn't been calling or where does he go almost every weekend for the past three months. Things got ugly fast when

she mentioned his weekend excursions. He snapped and got all red face saying he wasn't cheating if that's what she

was implying. After that my mom lost all sanity and told him to pack his things and leave telling him he was no longer

welcome in this house.

I shook my head trying to clear my head of the awful image in my head as my dad ascended the stairs to his and moms

bedroom and packed his stuff. Kelly and I followed him around begging him not to leave. He patted us both on the

head and told us it couldn't be helped and that no matter what that we were still his little girls and that he loved us very

much. I could have died when I watched from the porch as he got in his truck and drove away. It did in a way felt like I

died at least a part of me. It wasn't the same when he wasn't here the house was empty and quiet without his booming

laugh to fill it. I missed him constantly teasing me about my hair everyone in my house was blond except me my hair

was dark brown and chin length. He used to say I was adopted. It felt like forever but he was only gone for a day now.

Eventually my thoughts drifted to Thomas I sighed. It was ridiculous I couldn't go a day without thinking of him. I

wonder what he was doing now with that girlfriend of his. I didn't like her for two reasons: First because she was

dating the guy I loved. Second she was probably the most evil human being on the planet. The girl had something

against me. She went out of her way to make a snide remark or give me a dirty look. She never did this in front of

Thomas of course for fear that he might not like her being rude to one of Thomas's close friends. I cursed under my

breath thinking of her all over Thomas, My Thomas Her long skinny fingers all over his body. "Ugh she has to go!" I

said sitting up on my bed.

"Bree I swear you scare me sometimes." Yuki said she was just stepping out of my closet an arm full of jeans and tops

in her arms. "Now what's on your mind?" Yuki said dumping the clothes on my bed beside me.

"It's Thomas when will he realize that I'm the one for him?" I folded my arms.

"Oh I see this is about Thomas. Yuki said sitting back down on my coach. She crossed her legs and leaned forward

imitating a therapist. I guess that made me her patient.

"Well doctor Nakamoto. It's his girlfriend I don't think she is the best choice for him." I said going along with her

charade. She grinned wickedly her dark brown eyes flashing "What do you intend to do about that?" she said

I smiled she knew what I wanted to do. "I don't know the details of my plan yet but she is most definitely going …

Down."