What's up this is BeastfromHell coming to you with my first fanfic. I don't Know if I'm any good, but that's what reviews are for. Now sit back and enjoy the text.
Chapter 1: The Start of Something Great
A young, jet black wolf raced through the woods. He did not know were he was going, he was just trying to get away. The wolf raced for what seemed like hours, his paws throbbed and his battered body ached. He decided to take a break in a small clearing. Just then the wolf collapsed, weak and tired. He knew he would die and welcomed it. Just then a black figure came towards the wolf, then everything went dark.
The wolf opened his eyes to see that he was in a small cave. He looked at his body and saw that someone had treated his wounds. He tried to stand but was still very weak.
'' Looks like your finally awake.'' Came a very strong but gentle voice from the cave entrance.
The wolf turned around to see a large, solid black wolf walk into the cave. He had a piece of meat in his jaws which he dropped on the ground in front of the small wolf. The small wolf looked at it thinking if he should eat it.
'' Eat, you'll need your strength.'' The large wolf said in his gentle yet firm voice.
The small wolf then began to eat. '' Why did you help me?'' The small wolf asked after finishing the meat.
'' Because I didn't want to watch a child die.'' The large wolf said frankly.
'' Well, thank you, I should probably be on me way now.'' The small wolf said as he tried to stand again, only to drop to the floor with a soft thud.
'' Your still to weak, you must rest.'' The large wolf said in a commanding tone.
The small wolf then nodded his head and laid down to rest.
'' What is your name?'' Asked the large wolf.
'' Huh?'' said the small wolf.
'' Your name, what is your name?'' Asked the large wolf a second time.
'' Oh, um, Lon.'' Said the small wolf.
The large wolf had his back turned to Lon, but the moment that name hit his ears, he froze. '' What?'' Said the wolf in a disbelieving voice.
'' Lon, my name is Lon.'' Lon repeated.'' Is something wrong?'' Lon asked noticing the wolf tense up.
The large wolf shook his head and turned to face the cave entrance.'' It's nothing, you should get some sleep.'' Said the wolf while he walked towards the entrance.
Lon nodded his head and laid down.'' By the way, what's yours?'' Asked Lon.
The large wolf stopped and turned his head.'' Savage.'' Was all the wolf said before walking again.
'' Hmm... cool name.'' Lon said before falling asleep.
Savage then walked out into the cool night and stared at the moon.'' Thank you,'' he said as a single tear streamed down his face,'' thank you for bringing him back to me.''
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