I just really, really wanted to write a free verse. I have no idea what this is. Any guesses are welcome. S o are f-l-a-m-e-s. ...God help you.

D e a t h, death, DEATH,

T H A T is what I T was al l bouboutbout

BuT Becau$e it Burn$

S I-I e was Begining to doubtdoubtdoubt

Fate i$ just C-R-U-E-L

But...

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But BecU$e she D i D n'tk n o w

She kept believing

It distractedher

It kepthersane

So she nevereverever asked why

nevereverever s t op p e d tothink

And when she Y E L L E D

$he wanted to cry.

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weakstupidpathetic

Then he came

$ a i d she didn't have to be like h e r

(But even he knew it was a

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S o tired o.f. trying

S o sick o.f. smiling

S h e prayed that she'd be

D y i n g

Then that hapenned, too

A n d she s t i l l didn't have her

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OK, so now I know what it's about. It's about Natalie. And now the explanantion:

See, Natatlie notices how every one that pissed off her mom in the hunt got wacked, but she wouldn't let herself believe that it was her mom's fault. Then her mom began acting mean to her, and she wanted to cry, but was taught it was a weakness. Then Dan/Ian/whoever the h*** you want comes along, and tells Nat that she doesn't have to be like Isabel, but even he knows that she does. Then Natalie got so desperate for her mother's love, she began to die inside, yet Isabel doesn't notice her. My first free verse, be gentle.

Everyone of us is a seed. Some of us can survive in hard conditions, some of us need extra care, but we all need water. Water us with love, and we'll grow. But even then, we'll still need water and TV.-Alexandra

Look what I can do!

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I wonder what that is...PM me your guess!