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"hey Bella" says Edward
"hi Edward" I say
"I love you" he says
"I love you too" he answers
then a bgi vampre jumped out of the bushes and went to bite us.
"no bella" shouted Edward
he jumped in fromt of me and the vampre riped him apaer
"Edward noooo" I cried
"hes dead haahasaha" says the vampire
"noooo" says o
then the vampre grabed me and strtaed to ran away
"bella noooo" shouts jasper
jasper jumps out of the bushs and goed to byte the vampre
"nooo" souts the vampr
the vampr dropes me and rans away
"jasper thanx" I says
"no problem where is Edward" he aks
"he dide" I says
"oh no" says jasper
then he picks me up nad we go to his husoe
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