ok this is my third story and he aint a murderer

I wake up to my mom yelling that breakfast is almost ready so I get dressed in my jeans black shirt with blue and white jacket and finally my hat I walk downstairs to Pikachu eating pokemon food and bacon eggs and toast on the table (team rocket isn't evil and they make devices for pokemon to talk) I walk in the kitchen and Pikachu says "hey ash" I replied "hey Pikachu good morning mom" and she tells me good morning and she puts 4 pieces of bacon on my plate and 3 eggs with 2 pieces of toast with miltank butter and as I eat I see Pikachu eying me and Pikachu finishes eating then I go to oaks lab to get a starter pokemon and a pokedex (his mom gave him Pikachu) so I walk to the lab and see gary walk out of the lab with a pokeball he just flips me off as I walk by and don't say anything I walk in and oak says "ahh good morning ash here to get a pokemon on this table I have 18 starters all from every region" I look at all the pokemon and I eventually choose charmander so I get his ball and 5 pokeballs a pokedex and 10 potions I go home pack my stuff and ask my mom if I can go on an adventure and she says yes so I go upstairs get my clothes and a sleeping bag and half of the money I saved up I call pikachu over "all his pokemon will be female" he leaves the house and goes to route 1 when he gets there Pikachu is starting to get horny because its mating season and about an hour later it starts to get dark so they set up camp and that's when Pikachu asks ash if he knows what sex is

cliffhanger review plz