Authors Note To The People
Ok, now, I have been writing Outlaw Star crossovers since I was in 6th grade, and have come to enjoy the work. Of course I never got a big audience because I never showed them to anyone but my friends. It means a lot to put my biggest story on the web, and now I need you peoples to read and, that's right, review it, and tell me anything that is wrong with it. Now I know that there are some errors in the first 25 pages with not making a new sentence when a person speaks. And there is some crummy writing, because when I started this fic it was December 23, 2001, and now it is finished, (The Alpha Version anyways.) May 1, 2003. (That's right, a whole year. I hit some writers block along a period of three months, so I was kind of out of it.)
I need someone to tell me how to make it better, and frankly, everyone who I know is too damned lazy to read it. So now I ask you, the people of the internet, to tell me what is wrong. Thank you.
~And by the way, I don't own Outlaw Start or anything of it, ok? Except this story~
Ok, now, I have been writing Outlaw Star crossovers since I was in 6th grade, and have come to enjoy the work. Of course I never got a big audience because I never showed them to anyone but my friends. It means a lot to put my biggest story on the web, and now I need you peoples to read and, that's right, review it, and tell me anything that is wrong with it. Now I know that there are some errors in the first 25 pages with not making a new sentence when a person speaks. And there is some crummy writing, because when I started this fic it was December 23, 2001, and now it is finished, (The Alpha Version anyways.) May 1, 2003. (That's right, a whole year. I hit some writers block along a period of three months, so I was kind of out of it.)
I need someone to tell me how to make it better, and frankly, everyone who I know is too damned lazy to read it. So now I ask you, the people of the internet, to tell me what is wrong. Thank you.
~And by the way, I don't own Outlaw Start or anything of it, ok? Except this story~