Draft star wars chapter 1
I will make references from the movies, I use actual planets from the saga as well but if you don't know what the planets or the places are just google it. This is my made up story, If you like it follow. Thanks!
I was taking a night jog around the park, it was quite and pretty dark. I took a break and walked over to the bench and sat down and then took a sip of my bottle of water. I looked up at the night sky looking at all the stars I could see, till one star was getting bright it kept getting brighter. It looked like it was getting closer to where I was, I stood up and started stepping back from the bench. I started hearing a faint falling noise, looked back up and the light was even bigger. I Ran from the bench and went to the public bathrooms and took cover behind the wall, then I hear a huge crash noise. I peak around the wall and I see this gigantic crater. I slowly walk towards the scene and I see a blue flashing light, I slid down the crater and I see a black pod that has a blue hand (human) print flashing. I wondered if there was an alien inside or I could have like some weird awesome super power and be the hero of earth. So I put my hand on the pod, then two needles pricked me and took my blood.
Bright light started to flash from where my hand is at, then the grounded started to shake I started to scream for help and then I got blinded by the light. All I could see is white and it felt like I was falling, the white disappeared and then black appeared stars started passing by me. It went black again and I slightly started to see trees, lakes and mountains in an instances I fell in the lake. I quickly swam up to the surface, and started swimming to shore. I crawled to land out of breathe, I lay down on my back looking up still coughing.
I was wondering where I was then it hit me, the pod was a teleportation machine. What place did I teleport to on earth? It was still dark but I got up I took my phone out and it had water in it "sigh* great it's broke" I said I drop my phone and then I saw a black rectangular box, I picked it up and it had a lock on it. I tried to break the lock with a rock but it didn't break, so I put it in my pocket and started wandering through the forest. I found some weird building that had markings I never seen, but I walk through the front door... all I see is alien's different shapes and sizes, male and female. No one was really surprised to see a human so I walk to a booth that was empty, I sat down and put the black case on the table.
I was soaking wet and trying to figure out what the hell is going on or maybe I'm dreaming than some red lady with tail heads sat in front of me with robes saying here young one I thanked her and went to a room and put on the robes and the belt I looked in the mirror laughed and said to myself I look like a Jedi. i walked out the room and sat at the booth with the tail head lady, she asked why was I soaked and what was in the black box I replied I was in a lake and I don't know what is inside. She grabs the box and closes her eyes and * click* the box opens I was in awe, I asked her how'd she do that. She replied the force I said wait the force as in the force force that surrounds you? She chuckled yes young one and what is your name. I didn't want to use my real name so I used my gamer name, my name is Caruso.
I asked what is hers she said I'm master Errai Bomisus, master? I questioned She said yes I'm a Jedi mas- you're a Jedi master I stood up and yelled she said yes yes now sit. I sat back down she opened the box all I saw was a bunch of metal and a blue crystal, I said to her is this parts for lightsaber she replied yes where did you get this? I told her I found it on the shore when I got out the lake. She told me to bring out my hands then she grabbed my hands and told me to close my eyes, she said don't think let the force guide you feel it and in brace. I started to feel a present over me, I heard clicking noises and she told me to open my eyes and it was built into a lightsaber, it was black and silver very unique. She gave it to me and said I will take you to the Jedi temple. But before she could tell me more someone ran into the lounge and said the empire is coming! Errai got up and I stood up as well I put my lightsaber on my belt and we rush to the front door it was morning out but the whole sky was filled with empire starships.
Errai told me we need to Leave I agreed with her, everyone started running to the exits I followed Errai we went down stairs to a secret path way she said this will lead us to her ship. But the door is locked and chained, she pulls out her lightsaber *Pssshhew* bright green color. She stabs the wall and starts making a big circle. I hear footsteps coming down the stairs I turn on my lightsaber blue light coming out, hearing the sound *Nnnnnnnnn* while the saber is motionless. Waiting for the enemy to come down the steps then two Stormtroopers walk down Errai is almost down with the door, the troopers started shooting at us. I block the first 3 shots the door falls back and Errai force pushes the troopers. I follow her down the tunnel, I can see the latter the leads up to the surface, Errai climbs up first then me.
It was like a war going on in the sky and on the ground, I could see the ship which is probably Errai's we rush to the ship and there's one droid standing outside by it, she yells 3r2r get the ship ready. We get to the ship errai goes inside the cockpit turns on shields. I sit down in the lounge room which was pretty nice. The ship takes off Errai tells 3r2r to turn on the camouflage, I look outside and were already in the sky we past the empire starships with ease. Errai told me were going into hyper drive I set the destination to the Jedi temple, I sat next to her in the cockpit and told her I'm ready.