Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in TFATF (although i would like 2),so please dont sue me.
Ok,so this is my First fanfic, so i want feed back,good or bad.
Hope you guys enjoy this story.
Prologue:
All is good at the Toretto household.Leon and Jesse are playing XBOX, VInce is talking to himself,Mia's preparing the salad and Letty and Dom are working on the Eclipse.
The phone rings and jesse picks it up.
"Yup,who's dis",Jesse goes. He sounds irritated cause he's losing to Leon.
"This is an international call form Mexico,may i speak to Miss Letty Rodrigues please", says the voice.
"Yeah,woteva", says jesse
Over the comotion of the game, Jesse shouts over to Letty to come and take the call.
"Ok Ok jesse,i'm comin,look,will you stop shouting already, i can hear you",Letty replies,She's aggitated.
"Hello,who is this"?
"Hello Letty,is that really you?"
"No,its my spirit,i'm actually dead",letty says with sarcasm."Ofcourse its me,now who is this?"
"Letty, my dear daughter,its me your mother.I have something to tell you, its....its your Father,he's...he's gone into a coma", said the voice on the other line.
This hit Letty like a bulet. Her father,whom she cared about so much,who had cared for her so much, had now gone into a coma.
She stiffened, and tried to fight the tears that wereforming in her eyes.
"Mama,where is papa right now,where is he?",she shouted.
"He's at the hospital but he wishes that you come and see him immediatly. he wants to say his goodbyes to you befor he passes away".
"Ok ok,ermmm,tell papa to hang on,i'll catch a plane and come ok,mama,just tell him to hold on",Letty says,and puts the phone down.
Dom walks in the house now and can she her. She's crying,covering her face with those tender hands of hers.
"Whats wrong gurl",asks Dom, "Why u cryin"
"Its my Father, he's gonna Die, i....i gotta go, go to Mexico, i have to see him",Letty tells him
She runs up the stairs,shuts the door and begins throwing clothes into her bag,swearing, and crying at the same time. Dom and the rest of the group run upstairs and bang on the door, but she ignores them.
"How the ell could you do this to me dad, you cant leave me and mum, i'll hate you forever if you do that" she thinks.
After packing she opens the door. Theyare expecting her to explain herself, to tell them what really going on, but no.....she will not tell them,they would'nt know the pain she's going through.
Letty looks at them,giving one last smile and leaves the house, without saying her goodbyes to Jesse, Leon and Vince,without thanking Mia for being lke a sister to her,without Kissing Dom goodbye.
Dom runs after her,shouting and asking where the hell she was off to,but she did'nt look back,just went on...
She goes to the airport, and looks at the plane which will fly her to Mexico, to her papa and mama, home...where she should be.
Ok,so this is my First fanfic, so i want feed back,good or bad.
Hope you guys enjoy this story.
Prologue:
All is good at the Toretto household.Leon and Jesse are playing XBOX, VInce is talking to himself,Mia's preparing the salad and Letty and Dom are working on the Eclipse.
The phone rings and jesse picks it up.
"Yup,who's dis",Jesse goes. He sounds irritated cause he's losing to Leon.
"This is an international call form Mexico,may i speak to Miss Letty Rodrigues please", says the voice.
"Yeah,woteva", says jesse
Over the comotion of the game, Jesse shouts over to Letty to come and take the call.
"Ok Ok jesse,i'm comin,look,will you stop shouting already, i can hear you",Letty replies,She's aggitated.
"Hello,who is this"?
"Hello Letty,is that really you?"
"No,its my spirit,i'm actually dead",letty says with sarcasm."Ofcourse its me,now who is this?"
"Letty, my dear daughter,its me your mother.I have something to tell you, its....its your Father,he's...he's gone into a coma", said the voice on the other line.
This hit Letty like a bulet. Her father,whom she cared about so much,who had cared for her so much, had now gone into a coma.
She stiffened, and tried to fight the tears that wereforming in her eyes.
"Mama,where is papa right now,where is he?",she shouted.
"He's at the hospital but he wishes that you come and see him immediatly. he wants to say his goodbyes to you befor he passes away".
"Ok ok,ermmm,tell papa to hang on,i'll catch a plane and come ok,mama,just tell him to hold on",Letty says,and puts the phone down.
Dom walks in the house now and can she her. She's crying,covering her face with those tender hands of hers.
"Whats wrong gurl",asks Dom, "Why u cryin"
"Its my Father, he's gonna Die, i....i gotta go, go to Mexico, i have to see him",Letty tells him
She runs up the stairs,shuts the door and begins throwing clothes into her bag,swearing, and crying at the same time. Dom and the rest of the group run upstairs and bang on the door, but she ignores them.
"How the ell could you do this to me dad, you cant leave me and mum, i'll hate you forever if you do that" she thinks.
After packing she opens the door. Theyare expecting her to explain herself, to tell them what really going on, but no.....she will not tell them,they would'nt know the pain she's going through.
Letty looks at them,giving one last smile and leaves the house, without saying her goodbyes to Jesse, Leon and Vince,without thanking Mia for being lke a sister to her,without Kissing Dom goodbye.
Dom runs after her,shouting and asking where the hell she was off to,but she did'nt look back,just went on...
She goes to the airport, and looks at the plane which will fly her to Mexico, to her papa and mama, home...where she should be.
