Ok, So I'll introduce myself. I am Kinui. An aspiring, young, slightly insane writer. Here is the story that's been rolling around in my head for a few months, and the sole reason that I made an account on this darn addicting website. I'm gonna be posting the first chapter along with this prologue, as you can see below, there isn't any point really in posting such a short thing alone.
Anywho. I welcome criticism of any kind. Flames are never liked but will not bother me at all. So many new writers are always saying, "it's my first fic. please be nice." No niceness! Be harsh! ok, well, not harsh, but I want to improve my writing so feel free to point out every little thing I've done wrong...don't forget though, everyone likes flattery ;D
Disclaimer: What the heck is the point of this thing? Yeah, I own Fullmetal Alchemist, that's why I'm writing on a fanfiction site. Uh-huh... (except, i really don't)
Prologue
"Give it up, Fullmetal. There is no escape."
"There is no escape? Are you serious? That's the best you can come up with?"
"Don't make me do it, Edward."
"Yeah right, like you even have the guts."
"I'm warning you, Fullmetal. If you surrender now, we may be able to work out some kind of deal."
"A deal? With you military bastards? In your dreams."
"Last chance, Edward. If you come in with us –"
"I dare you."
"…What?"
" I. Dare. You. "
"…..."
…Snap…