I'm broken
words- means the poem is being told
words–means I am talking to you. Like at the beginning of the main part, or story or whatever!
Dark-chan: HI peoples! I wanted to write this 'poem' down. This was for school, in S.E.T class. S.E.T is like a side class, not a study hall. We are like an extra session in; sports, music and etc. But this time around it was the classes doing whatever the teachers have planned, and it was a Poetry Slam in Mrs. G's class. Tell me how good or bad my poem is!
I have been broken.
The world showed its hate for me in, glares to me.
My heart changes to the color black.
The world glares at me and expects me to fall into a hole, but I glare back to the world.
I have learned to hate the world
My heart is broken.
The pieces are black with hate.
It's all your fault, and you know it.
That I'm broken, that I have my heart in pieces and that's it's all dark.
All of my love has left me, and there is nothing left.
The smile on my face is fake.
I have no happiness.
I am dead.
Then they came for me.
They say, "We will fix you.."
There it was..
I wanted to trust again…
to feel again….
to be alive again…..
I would just try once more..
With them I feel alive, happiness…
I life again…
Only if it was real.
I am still alone.
My lights have not come for me…..
I am still dead.
Because of your hate for me…
I am going to do everything to get the world to feel my pain..
and to go through what I went through….
Which was death…. of the heart and my life…..
Dark-chan: I hoped you guys liked it! Cause I am thinking about putting into my another story, 'Arisu and the Akatsuki' Like before she met the Akatsuki. This is what she felt like, broken… No, it was more like that Arisu, was sick of being hated and used…
Itachi: But Dark-chan might not use this poem in, 'Arisu and the Akatsuki'
Dark-chan: Cause it does sound like how Arisu sometimes feels, but at the same time doesn't, so….
Sasori: So it would be nice if you guys told her if it should or shouldn't go into the story.
Dark-chan: I REALLY think that I won't put this poem in, 'Arisu and the Akatsuki' Tell if you think it should in another flash back chapters! Oh, and sorry if I haven't updated on 'Arisu and the Akatsuki'! I am having writer block!