Here is my first fanfiction... (Please don't be mean!) And a special thank you to NinjaNakkiofCabin11 and Rekanele.
Please let me know you are out there. Please.
Disclaimer: I do not own PJO or the HOO
My life was normal. Until my foster mother showed her true colors, not like yelling at me in front of my foster father, but turning into a monster. But I'm getting ahead of myself.
It started when my best friend Rhett, who has long, flaming red hair, the brightest green eyes anyone had ever seen—she also was the next door neighbor's daughter—came over to my house. Rhett and I went into the kitchen to grab some Coke and chocolate chip cookies (because our parents said we had to layoff of the sugar) .We thought no one was home.
Then I heard the sound of breaking glass. I jumped immediately out of my seat and ran to the kitchen to see my foster mother with six arms, six heads with four eyes each, and at the lower part of her body, six hideous dogs with mouth containing three rows of razor sharp teeth. Hiss.
"Daughter of the Underworld must die! She insults the Gods," she hissed.
At first I thought she meant Rhett, but she dropped Rhett and came after me. Thinking quickly, I grabbed a knife.
She started to laugh. "Pitiful demigod! You should know steel doesn't hurt me!"
She laughed some more, and I didn't know what to do. My first thought was to get Rhett and me out of the house, but something weird happened to my foster father, who came running into the kitchen with a bronze knife. And the moment he saw the fiend, he dropped the knife. Just looking at the beast, I grabbed the bronze knife and ran up to the monster.
"NO, DON'T GET CLOSE TO IT!" I heard my foster father yell, but it was too late. I was face to face with one of its heads and I took one stab. She turned into dust.
"Are you okay, Olivia? And Rhett?" My foster father asked.
Rhett just nodded, who was sitting in the corner of the room, her red hair tangled.
"And you?" he asked again.
"What was that thing?" I almost yelled.
"Um... a Scylla, a t-"
I was looked down to see a goat's hooves.
"You are a faun, I mean a satyr," I stated as he picked up Rhett, who was still in shock.
"What gave it away? My real name is Zahur," he said sarcastically. I didn't reply and got into the car next to Rhett.
"Okay, where are we going?" Rhett said.
"To Camp Half-Blood," he answered.
"What's Camp Half-Blood? What's a demigod?" Rhett asked.
"Okay, you know about the Greek gods? Well, they are real, and have children with mortals. And that child is a demigod, half-god and half mortal," he answered.
"What did she mean when she said, 'I insult the Gods'? I don't remember insulting any godly people," I asked.
He didn't say anything.
We didn't talk for the rest of the ride until we stopped at a strawberry field.
"We are here!" Zahur sang and look down to see the time. "7:00! Just in time for dinner!"
"Are we going to have strawberries for dinner? What's for breakfast? Blueberries. I know you can't cook but strawberries for din-" I stop to see an archway that looked like a three year old wrote it. I was about to tell Zahur that this has to be a joke, but I look again to see CAMP HALF-BLOOD.
We walked up to a pine tree.
"Okay, you two are safe. Go to the big, blue house and tell Chiron that Zahur sent you and that you two fought a Scylla," he told us. Then he ran away. We slowly walked to the big, blue house. Not knowing what to expect.
Please tell me what you think! Does it move too fast? The anonymous review is on, so if you don't have an account, you can review! And Percy and Annabeth will come later at some point. If I just get one review I will write more! Please be nice!