This is my first fanfiction so send me lots of reviews . I noticed that heres not alot of Etcetera stories so i started one.


"Oh she's so cute' said a queen's voice, she recognized it as Demeter's.

"Yes, she'll be a beautiful queen when she gets older" she heard another voice which sounded like Bombalurina's.

Etcetera was listening at the door to the infirmary, her mother had not permitted them too see her new sister yet.

Electra, her twin sister, ran by her "oh there you are Cety , I've been looking for you" she said coming to an abrupt stop.

"Sorry I was just….."

"Were you snooping, mom told us not too come in till Jenny told us too."

"I know, I just wanted to hear", just as she said that the door opened

"Oh Etcetera, Electra, I was just going to get you, come in" said Jenny a smile on her face.

They stepped into the infirmary too see Deme and Bomba gathered around there mother; Jellylorum in bed with there new baby sister.

"Hello girls, id like you to meet your new sister; Maybell."

'She's beautiful' Etcetera thought.

She was a golden color, with bright green eyes that sparkle, her paws were cream and so was the tip of her tail and ears. She giggled as Etcetera looked at her.


2 Years Later

It was 2 days before the jellicle ball, Etcetera and Electra were waiting for Jemima and Victoria to show up.

Next year Victoria would be performing the mating dance. As they sat on the tire Fabienne walked by them.

Fabienne was the adopted daughter of Bustopher Jones and would be performing the mating dance this year. She was white with maroon stripes and wore a red collar.

Electra walked up to Fabienne.

"have you seen Jemima and Victoria"

"Yeah there coming"

Just then Victoria and Jemima walked in.

"Sorry were late" Victoria called to them." we were with Maybell"

"Its ok" said Electra "we dont mind"

Etctera on the other hand did mind, she hated how it was always Maybell who got attention.

"you ok Cety" Electra looked concerned

"im fine" she said running off towards home.

"Cety Wait!" Electra shouted to her but she was already gone.....


So thats the beginning, kinda boring start. just to point out Fabienne is my OC and it should get more intresting in the next 2 chapters.